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Suggestion for more simpler language and few Fixes in format and grammer.

  1. For clarity & conciseness
    ->Original: "CloudMonkey can be used both as an interactive shell and as a command line tool which simplifies Apache
    CloudStack configuration and management."
    ->Corrected: "It can be used both as an interactive shell and as a command-line tool, simplifying Apache CloudStack
    configuration and management."

  2. Verb Agreement
    ->Original: "The modern cloudmonkey is a re-written and simplified port in Go and can be used with Apache CloudStack
    4.9 and above."
    ->Corrected: "The modern CloudMonkey is a rewritten and simplified port in Go, compatible with Apache CloudStack 4.9
    and above."

  1. Punctuation Errors

    Original: "For development the pre-requisites are Go 1.11 or latest and a unix-like environment."
    Corrected: "To develop CloudMonkey, you need Go 1.11 or later and a Unix-like environment."

  2. Incorrect Prepositions & Formatting

    Original: "One would have to hence do an initial setup of basic configuration such apikey/secretkey/username/
    password/url for the required profile(s) as required."
    Corrected: "One must first set up basic configurations such as apikey, secretkey, username, password, and url for the
    required profile(s)."

@rohityadavcloud rohityadavcloud merged commit dc0266f into apache:main Mar 19, 2025
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