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polish: Fix some inconsistencies in object names and messages (#506)
* Replace ACL List with ACL * Replace Userdata with User Data * Addressed review comments and updated screenshots
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source/adminguide/api.rst

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User Data and Meta Data
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The user-data service on a Shared or Isolated Network can be provided through the
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The User Data service on a Shared or Isolated Network can be provided through the
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Virtual Router or through an attached iso called the Config drive.
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User Data and Meta Data Via Virtual Router
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CloudStack provides API access to attach up to 32KB of user data to a
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CloudStack provides API access to attach up to 32KB of User Data to a
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deployed Instance. Deployed Instances also have access to metadata via the
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virtual router.
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User data can be accessed once the IP address of the virtual router is
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User Data can be accessed once the IP address of the virtual router is
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known. Once the IP address is known, use the following steps to access
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the user data:
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the User Data:
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#. Run the following command to find the virtual router.
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.. code:: bash
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# cat /var/lib/dhclient/dhclient-eth0.leases | grep dhcp-server-identifier | tail -1
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#. Access user data by running the following command using the result of
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#. Access User Data by running the following command using the result of
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the above command
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Config drive is an ISO file that is mounted as a cd-rom on a user Instance and
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contains related userdata, metadata (incl. ssh-keys) and
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contains related User Data, metadata (incl. ssh-keys) and
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password files.
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Enable config drive
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To use the config drive the Network offering must have the “ConfigDrive”
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provider selected for the userdata service.
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provider selected for the User Data service.
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If the networkoffering uses ConfigDrive for userdata and the Template is
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If the networkoffering uses ConfigDrive for User Data and the Template is
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password enabled, the password string for the Instance is placed in the
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vm_password.txt file and it is included in the ISO.
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is mounted on 1st cd/dvd drive. This means existing functionality of
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At password reset or update of user data, the Config Drive ISO
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At password reset or update of User Data, the Config Drive ISO
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will be rebuilt. The existing ISO is mounted on a temporary directory,
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password, userdata or ssh-keys are updated and a new ISO is built from the
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password, User Data or ssh-keys are updated and a new ISO is built from the
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updated directory structure.
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In case of a password reset, the new password will be picked-up at Instance start.
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To access the updated userdata, the user needs to remount the config drive ISO.
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To access the updated User Data, the user needs to remount the config drive ISO.
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When an Instance is stopped, the ConfigDrive network element will trigger the
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Secondary Storage VM to remove the ISO from the secondary storage.

source/adminguide/autoscale_with_virtual_router.rst

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- Userdata: The userdata of the Instances.
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- User Data: The User Data of the Instances.
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For more information, see `“User-Data and Meta-Data
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<virtual_machines.html#user-data-and-meta-data>`_.
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For more information, see `“User Data and Metadata
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AutoScale Policies
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|autoscale-vmgroup-profile-update.png|
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You are able to reset User Data of the Instance, by clicking Reset User Data on AutoScale Instance Group button.
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|autoscale-vmgroup-profile-reset-userdata.png|
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.. |autoscale-vmgroup-profile-update.png| image:: /_static/images/autoscale-vmgroup-profile-update.png
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:alt: Reset User Data in AutoScale Instance Profile.
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source/adminguide/networking.rst

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Data” <api.html#user-data-and-meta-data>`_.
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” <api.html#user-data-and-metadata>`_.
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source/adminguide/networking/dynamic_static_routing.rst

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- NATTED. This is the default network mode of isolated networks. The VR of isolated networks and VPCs provides Source NAT services, as well as Static NAT, Load Balancer, Port Forwarding, VPN if the network offering supports.
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- ROUTED. For isolated networks in ROUTED mode, the VR no longer supports Source NAT, Static NAT, Load Balancer, Port Forwarding and VPN. The supported services are DNS, DHCP, User data, Firewall (for isolated networks) and Network ACL (for VPC and VPC networks).
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source/adminguide/networking/remote_access_vpn.rst

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