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Co-authored-by: Renat0Ribeir0 <[email protected]>

Author: gorillagripcore

content/Hardware Support/Shields and Carriers/How-to-calibrate-the-internal-temperature-sensor.md

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-title: "How to calibrate the internal temperature sensor"
+title: "Calibrate the internal temperature sensor on an Arduino device"
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-When working with internal temperature sensors, such as those found on boards like the Arduino MKR IoT Carrier or the Nicla Sense ME, one common issue is inaccurate temperature readings due to self-heating. Self-heating occurs because components on the board generate heat, which can lead to temperature readings higher than the actual environmental temperature. Factors like power usage, board positioning, and the running code can increase the impact of this effect.
+When using devices with internal temperature sensors, such as the Arduino Nicla Sense ME or the Arduino MKR IoT Carrier, a common issue is inaccurate temperature readings due to self-heating. This happens because heat generated by other components on the device can affect the sensor, leading to higher readings than the actual ambient temperature. Factors like power supply, board positioning, and the specific code running on the device can increase the impact of this effect.
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+Calibrating the internal sensor can correct these inaccuracies, giving you more accurate temperature readings.
 
 ## Steps to calibrate the temperature sensor
 
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 ### Implement the offset in your sketch
 
-Once you have determined the offset, you can adjust the temperature readings in your sketch. Locate the part of the code that retrieves the temperature value and apply the offset by either adding or subtracting it based on whether your sensor reads higher or lower than the actual temperature.
+Once you have determined the offset, you can adjust the temperature readings in your sketch. Locate the part of the code that retrieves the temperature value and subtract the offset. For example:
 
 ```
 float temperature = sensor.readTemperature(); // Function to get temperature from the sensor
 
 float offset = 5; // Your calculated offset
 
-float calibratedTemperature = temperature - offset;
+float calibratedTemperature = temperature - offset; // Apply the offset
 ```