Add tweaks during IFC call

Author: jdswinbank

finance/community-updates/2020-10.txt

@@ -33,47 +33,50 @@ on our activities over the couple of months.
   This provides a total of $CAD 31,023 to develop a set of educational
   resources around packaging scientific software and to make them available
   through Learn Astropy [5]. We hope this marks the start of a long-term
-  collaboration between Astropy and the Dunlap Institute.
+  collaboration between the Astropy Project and the Dunlap Institute.
 
   [4] https://drive.google.com/file/d/1z-mV4YjkHyc6Xe645mO8kkjYlQC6rfgz/view
   [5] https://learn.astropy.org
 
 - NASA has announced a call for proposals for “Support for Source Tools,
   Frameworks, and Libraries” [6] as part of the ROSES-2020 [7] funding
   programme. According to the call, they expect to award a total of $1.5M (US)
-  spread over 5–10 different projects. This is a fantastic opportunity for
-  Astropy! Over the next few weeks, the Interim Finance Committee will aim to
-  coordinate a proposal. For now, we invite you to use astropy-project #161
-  [8] to start brainstorming your ideas.
+  spread over 5–10 different projects. This is a fantastic opportunity for the
+  Astropy Project! Over the next few weeks, the Interim Finance Committee will
+  aim to coordinate a proposal. For now, we invite you to use astropy-project
+  #161 [8] to start brainstorming your ideas.
 
   [6] https://nspires.nasaprs.com/external/solicitations/summary.do?solId=%7b958CF134-D655-E512-B5AD-84501D14A0C1%7d&path=&method=init
   [7] https://nspires.nasaprs.com/external/solicitations/summary.do?solId=%7bBCEE336B-D550-CCBA-1C8C-7A866DB06F45%7d&path=&method=init
   [8] https://github.com/astropy/astropy-project/issues/161
 
 - As previously announced [9], the bulk of our funds available for supporting
-  core developers this year have been allocated to core contributors who were
-  interested in and able to accept funding. Statements of work for all of
-  these positions have now been finalized, and are available online [10].
-  Folks are hard at work, and the Finance Committee has been processing and
-  approving invoices and NumFocus has been issuing payments.
+  core developers this year have been allocated to the following core
+  contributors who were interested in and able to accept funding: Jan Luis
+  Cano, Lia Corrales, Kelle Cruz, Derek Homeier, Stuart Littlefair, Stuart
+  Mumford, Adrian Price-Whelan, Thomas Robitaille, and Ole Streicher.
+  Statements of work for of their positions have now been finalized, and are
+  available online [10]. They are hard at work, and the Finance Committee has
+  been processing and approving invoices and NumFocus has been issuing
+  payments.
 
   [ 9] https://groups.google.com/g/astropy-dev/c/qlNMpLpnPXI
   [10] https://github.com/astropy/astropy-project/issues/113
 
 - The next major project the Interim Finance Committee plans to undertake as
   part of the Moore grant is to issue a broad call for proposals for projects
-  to make improvements to any part of Astropy, including the core repository,
-  coordinated and affiliated packages, infrastructure, tutorials, workshops,
-  etc. In an effort to limit the burden on the community of large-scale
-  governance and planning discussions, we play to release this call after the
-  ongoing discussion over APE0 [11] has concluded. Before we release the call,
-  the community will have the chance to discuss the process we will use for
-  selecting proposals.
+  to make improvements to any part of the Astropy Project, including the core
+  repository, coordinated and affiliated packages, infrastructure, tutorials,
+  workshops, etc. In an effort to limit the burden on the community of
+  large-scale governance and planning discussions, we plan to release this
+  call after the ongoing discussion over APE0 [11] has concluded. Before we
+  release the call, the community will have the chance to discuss the process
+  we will use for selecting proposals.
 
   [11] https://github.com/astropy/astropy-APEs/pull/61
 
 For more information on our activities, please see the issues labelled
-“finance” in the Astropy project repo [12], or read the notes from our weekly
+“finance” in the astropy-project repo [12], or read the notes from our weekly
 meetings [13]. You can make suggestions for things that need to be funded by
 opening an issue in https://github.com/astropy/project/, by emailing
 [email protected], or by joining us in the #finance-committee channel on