clarify wording

Author: aignas

CHANGELOG.md

@@ -78,8 +78,8 @@ END_UNRELEASED_TEMPLATE
   off use `RULES_PYTHON_ENABLE_PIPSTAR=0` environment variable. If you do, please
   add a comment to
   [#2949](https://github.com/bazel-contrib/rules_python/issues/2949).
-  With this PR we are deprecating {obj}`pip.parse.experimental_target_platforms` and
-  {obj}`pip_repository.experimental_target_platforms`. It will be removed in the version.
+  With this release we are deprecating {obj}`pip.parse.experimental_target_platforms` and
+  {obj}`pip_repository.experimental_target_platforms`.
 
 {#v0-0-0-fixed}
 ### Fixed