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@@ -11,27 +11,27 @@ What we've done
 
 * We added a `GTK implementation of Geolocation services <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/2999>`__.
 
-* We made a number of improvements to Pack, Toga's style API. This includes `adding a justify-config style directive <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/3054>`__, `adding a gap style directive <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/3036>`__, and `updating a number of Pack properties to match their CSS names <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/3033>`__.
+* We made a number of improvements to Pack, Toga's style API. This includes `adding a "justify-content" style directive <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/3054>`__, `adding a "gap" style directive <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/3036>`__, and `updating a number of Pack properties to match their CSS names <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/3033>`__.
 
-* We `standardised the order in which Toga widgets are instantiated <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/2942>`__. This simplifies the implemenation process, and guaranteeing that the initial styles added to a widget are always applied.
+* We `standardised the way in which Toga widgets are instantiated <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/2942>`__. This simplifies the implementation process, and guarantees that the initial styles added to a widget are always applied.
 
 * We added an API for `reporting and controlling the state of Toga windows <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/2473>`__.
 
-* We modified Toga's web backend to be `compatible with Micropython <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/2976>`__. Micropython is significantly smaller that the full Pyodide install, reducing the startup time for web apps.
+* We began modifying Toga to be `compatible with MicroPython <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/2976>`__. MicroPython is significantly smaller than the full CPython install, reducing the startup time for web apps.
 
-* We updated `Briefcase's web template to use more recent PyScript APIs <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/2080>`__.
+* We updated `Briefcase's web template to use a more recent PyScript version <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/2080>`__.
 
 * We added `support for console apps in the Briefcase project conversion wizard <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/2089>`__.
 
 * We `improved error handling when updating Briefcase templates <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/2085>`__, accounting for some global git configuration options that were causing problems for some users.
 
-* We added `explicit support for passing options to pip <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/2059>`__ when installing dependencies with Briefcase. This is mostly useful for specifying alternative package repositories (with ``--index-url`` or ``--extra-index-url``) or local folders that contain wheels (with `--find-links`); but any pip arguments can be passed down to the pip invocation.
+* We added `explicit support for passing options to pip <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/2059>`__ when installing dependencies with Briefcase. This is mostly useful for specifying alternative package repositories (with ``--index-url`` or ``--extra-index-url``) or local folders that contain wheels (with ``--find-links``); but any pip arguments can be passed down to the pip invocation.
 
 * We `corrected an error in the default D-Bus configuration of Flatpak apps <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/2075>`__.
 
 * We resolved a `long-standing memory management issue in Rubicon <https://github.com/beeware/rubicon-objc/pull/543>`__. This change removes almost all need for manual memory management of ObjC objects, making iOS and macOS development much more robust. It also resolves some memory leak issues on Toga's iOS backend.
 
-* We added `support for CPython to stream stdout and stderr to the system log <https://github.com/python/cpython/pull/127592>`__. This change included a improved tool for running CPython test suites, making it possible to stream the output of a CPython test suite while the test suite is running, and to run the an arbitrary test suite, not just the CPython test suite.
+* We added support for CPython to `stream stdout and stderr to the system log on iOS and macOS <https://github.com/python/cpython/pull/127592>`__. This change included a improved tool for running CPython test suites, making it possible to stream the output of a CPython test suite while the test suite is running, and to run the an arbitrary test suite, not just the CPython test suite.
 
 * Our patch `adding a test-sources configuration in cibuildwheel <https://github.com/pypa/cibuildwheel/pull/2062>`__ has been accepted, and should be merged in a couple of days.