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Co-authored-by: Malcolm Smith <[email protected]>

Author: freakboy3742

content/news/buzz/september-2024-status-update/contents.lr

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 * Android is `now officially a Tier 3 platform in CPython <https://peps.python.org/pep-0011/#tier-3>`__! Over the last month, we've resolved a number of bugs that were preventing us from deploying a reliable buildbot for Android (on both x86_64 and ARM64); as a result, the CPython buildbot fleet now contains Android buidlbots. The Android-related changes to documentation have also been merged; the `Python 3.13.0rc3 release <https://www.python.org/downloads/release/python-3130rc3/>`__ incorporates all these changes.
 
-* We complete the `updates to Mobile Forge to support the new official iOS wheel format <https://github.com/beeware/mobile-forge/pull/55>`__, and published updated wheels in this format for the packages for which we have recipes. As part of these changes, we've also added CI checks to Mobile Forge.
+* We completed the `updates to Mobile Forge to support the new official iOS wheel format <https://github.com/beeware/mobile-forge/pull/55>`__, and published updated wheels in this format for the packages for which we have recipes. As part of these changes, we've also added CI checks to Mobile Forge.
 
 * We've `submitted a patch to support iOS in pip <https://github.com/pypa/pip/pull/12962>`__. This patch also requires some patches to `packaging <https://github.com/pypa/packaging/pull/832>`__ and `distlib <https://github.com/pypa/distlib/pull/231>`__ that pip includes as vendored copies.
 
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-In October, we will continuing working on binary package support for mobile platforms. In addition to responding to any review feedback on the patches we've already submitted, we'll be working on new patches for ``cibuildwheel`` and ``meson-python``, as well as tooling to make it easy for third-party libraries to run CPython test suites on mobile platforms. We should also be able finalise Briefcase's Python 3.13 support for Android, and start work on Android packaging. Supporting packaging for mobile platforms is a long term project which we expect to continue for several months; the hope is that by the end of the year, we will be able to contribute patches to third-party projects so that iOS and Android wheels become officially produced, rather than BeeWare maintained artefacts. 
+In October, we will continuing working on binary package support for mobile platforms. In addition to responding to any review feedback on the patches we've already submitted, we'll be working on new patches for ``cibuildwheel`` and ``meson-python``, as well as tooling to make it easy for third-party libraries to run CPython test suites on mobile platforms. We should also be able finalise Briefcase's Python 3.13 support for Android, and start work on Android packaging. Supporting packaging for mobile platforms is a long term project which we expect to continue for several months; the hope is that by the end of the year, we will be able to contribute patches to third-party projects so that iOS and Android wheels become officially produced, rather than BeeWare-maintained artefacts. 
 
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