Meetings: minor improvements to 2018-07-12 and 2018-07-19

Includes some text about Bitcoin.org written by John Newbery

Author: harding

_posts/en/meetings/2018-07-12-meeting.md

@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@ there important things that [we] would otherwise miss but [which] are
 Several meeting participants listed things they'd like to get in that
 they're worried won't be complete before the freeze:
 
-- [New `scantxout` RPC][#12196], mentioned by Jonas Schnelli
-- [New `disableprivatekey` setting][#9662] for watching-only wallets,
+- [New scantxout RPC][#12196], mentioned by Jonas Schnelli
+- [New disableprivatekey setting][#9662] for watching-only wallets,
   mentioned by Schnelli
 - [Partially-Signed Bitcoin Transactions support][#13557], mentioned by
   Andrew Chow

_posts/en/meetings/2018-07-19-meeting.md

@@ -85,8 +85,8 @@ of this segment of the meeting for a review deadline of Monday.
 **Background:** Coin selection is the name used for how a wallet chooses
 which of a user's bitcoins to spend in a particular transaction.  The
 selected *Unspent Transaction Outputs (UTXOs)*, often simply called
-*coins,* become *inputs* in the transaction.  Developers have spent many
-hours in the past year improving Bitcoin Core's coin selection to be
+*coins,* become *inputs* in the transaction.  Developers have spent
+a significant amount of time in the past year improving Bitcoin Core's coin selection to be
 able to sometimes improve privacy and lower transaction sizes (thus
 reducing fees) for users of Bitcoin Core's built-in wallet, with more
 improvements on the way.
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ node can use the seeder again if decentralized peer finding isn't
 working for it.
 
 There are several seeder programs written by different authors.  One of
-them is maintained by Pieter Wuille and is simply called `bitcoin-seeder`. 
+them is maintained by Pieter Wuille and is simply called [bitcoin-seeder][].
 
 **Discussion ([log][log seeder]):** Lucas Betschart requested and
 introduced the topic: "I thought because there are a few open issues and
@@ -197,18 +197,20 @@ it's the right message."  Luke Dashjr echoed that sentiment.
 
 ## Moving away from Bitcoin.org
 
-**Background:** Since the 2009 release of the original Bitcoin software,
-Bitcoin Core resources were traditionally hosted on Bitcoin.org.  But
-over time, this was augmented with additional resources about the
-increasingly diverse Bitcoin network, so (in December 2015) Bitcoin Core
-began using its own domain---initially just to host its resources but
-now also to host its software releases.  However, release announcements
-and software continue to be mirrored to Bitcoin.org.
+**Background:** since the 2009 release of the original Bitcoin software,
+Bitcoin (and later Bitcoin Core) resources have been hosted on
+Bitcoin.org. Over time, this was augmented with additional resources
+about the increasingly diverse Bitcoin network.
 
-**Discussion:** please see the [log][log bco].  Note some discussion
-also occurred [after the meeting][post-meeting bco].
+In December 2015 Bitcoin Core began using its own domain to host its
+resources, and later also to host its software releases. Release
+announcements and software continue to be mirrored to Bitcoin.org.
 
-[post-meeting bco]: https://botbot.me/freenode/bitcoin-core-dev/msg/102258762/
+**Discussion:** Andrew Chow introduced the topic by suggesting "moving away
+from Bitcoin.org". He added "we still link to bitcoin.org for things
+like downloads. [We] should probably change those". See the [log][log
+bco] for the full discussion. Some discussion also occurred [after the
+meeting][post-meeting bco].
 
 **Conclusion:** no explicit conclusion.  Post-meeting discussion seemed
 to indicate no significant changes to the current process.
@@ -292,13 +294,16 @@ and we will correct the mistake.
 [log seeder]: {{log}}#l-207
 [log bco]: {{log}}#l-231
 [log coredev meet]: {{log}}#l-279
+[post-meeting bco]: https://botbot.me/freenode/bitcoin-core-dev/msg/102258762/
+
 
 [meet osd]: /en/meetings/2018/06/28/#output-script-descriptors
 [osd gist]: https://gist.github.com/sipa/e3d23d498c430bb601c5bca83523fa82
 [coredev.tech]: https://coredev.tech/
 
 [0.16.2rc2 bin]: https://bitcoincore.org/bin/bitcoin-core-0.16.2/test.rc2/
 [0.17 milestone]: https://github.com/bitcoin/bitcoin/milestone/33
+[bitcoin-seeder]: https://github.com/sipa/bitcoin-seeder
 
 
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