rewording some sections

Author: stritt

src/content/changelog/workers/2025-10-27-better-faster-workers-dashboard.mdx

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 The Worker Metrics page has a new design. We cleaned up the summary cards, charts, and tables. The header now slides away as you scroll, giving you more room for your data. This is soon to become the standard for all metric pages.
 
 ### Faster Page Load
-The dashboard now loads 28% faster on average. The loading screen appears for 1-2 seconds less than before. Users far from our data centers will see the biggest improvement.
-We've also done some housekeeping to removed duplicate libraries and clean up the code. This cut the download size by 5% (over 1MB). Meaning your first visit to the dashboard will be faster.
+The dashboard now loads 28% faster on average, meaning the loading screen is 1-2 seconds faster than before. Users far from our data centers will see the biggest improvement.
+We've also done some housekeeping to removed duplicate libraries and clean up the code. This cut the download size by 5% (over 1MB).
 
 ### Smoother Experience
-We've upgraded our dashboard from React 17 to React 18 (it's been a long time coming, I know). Clicking around and navigating the dashboard now feels a lot more responsive, even when the page loads data in the background. React 18 is only a quick stop on the way to React 19, the team is currently working on that and hope to have it soon.
+We've upgraded our dashboard from React 17 to React 18 (yes, it's been a long time coming). Clicking around and navigating the dashboard now feels a lot more responsive, even when the page loads data in the background. 
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+This is only a quick pit stop on the way to React 19, the team is currently working on that and hope to have it soon.
 
 We want to hear what you think. If you have feedback or ideas for making the dashboard better, join the Cloudflare developer community on [Discord](https://discord.com/channels/595317990191398933/1064502845061210152).