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Co-authored-by: marciocloudflare <[email protected]>

Author: angelampcosta

src/content/docs/load-balancing/additional-options/load-balancing-china.mdx

@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ To enable load balancers to be deployed to the [China Network](/china-network/),
 1. A valid [ICP license](/china-network/concepts/icp/) for the zone in question.
 2. The zone must be provisioned with access to the China Network.
 
-Once these two criteria are met, any newly created load balancer will be automatically deployed to the China Network. When choosing a region for a pool health checks, `China` is now available to be selected in both the dashboard and API. 
+Once these two criteria are met, any newly created load balancer will be automatically deployed to the China Network. When choosing a region for a pool's health checks, `China` is now available to be selected in both the dashboard and API. 
 
-You can also create a load balancer by sending a POST request to the following endpoint. To deploy to the China Network with the API, the `networks` array in the API call must contain `jdcloud` as a value in addition to `cloudflare`. Refer to the [Cloudflare API documentation](/api/resources/load_balancers/methods/create/#request-body) for details on the required fields and their formats.
+You can also create a load balancer by sending a `POST` request to the following endpoint. To deploy to the China Network with the API, the `networks` array in the API call must contain `jdcloud` as a value in addition to `cloudflare`. Refer to the [Cloudflare API documentation](/api/resources/load_balancers/methods/create/#request-body) for details on the required fields and their formats.
 
 ```bash
 https://api.cloudflare.com/client/v4/zones/{zone_id}/load_balancers