update from PCX team comments

Author: deadlypants1973

src/content/docs/cloudflare-one/index.mdx

@@ -23,15 +23,15 @@ import {
 
 <Description>
 
-Secure your organization with Cloudflare Zero Trust - a cloud security model that replaces legacy perimeters with Cloudflare’s global network.
+Secure your organization with Cloudflare Zero Trust — a cloud security model that replaces legacy perimeters with Cloudflare’s global network.
 
 </Description>
 
 <Plan type="all" />
 
-**Cloudflare Zero Trust** is part of **Cloudflare One**, our name for the Secure Access Service Edge (SASE) platform that protects enterprise applications, users, devices, and networks.
+Cloudflare Zero Trust is part of Cloudflare One, our name for the Secure Access Service Edge (SASE) platform that protects enterprise applications, users, devices, and networks.
 
-By progressively adopting Cloudflare One, organizations can move away from a patchwork of hardware appliances and point solutions, and instead consolidate security and networking through a unified control plane that includes products like **Cloudflare Zero Trust Network Access (ZTNA)**, **Secure Web Gateway (SWG)**, **Cloudflare Tunnel**, **Data Loss Prevention (DLP)**, **Remote Browser Isolation (RBI)**, **Cloud Access Security Broker (CASB)**, and **Email Security**.
+By progressively adopting Cloudflare One, organizations can move away from a patchwork of hardware appliances and point solutions, and instead consolidate security and networking through a unified control plane that includes products like [Cloudflare Access](/cloudflare-one/policies/access/), [Secure Web Gateway (SWG)](/cloudflare-one/policies/gateway/), [Cloudflare Tunnel](/cloudflare-one/connections/connect-networks/), [Data Loss Prevention (DLP)](/cloudflare-one/policies/data-loss-prevention/), [Remote Browser Isolation (RBI)](/cloudflare-one/policies/browser-isolation/), [Cloud Access Security Broker (CASB)](/cloudflare-one/applications/casb/), and [Email Security](/cloudflare-one/email-security/).
 
 Refer to our [SASE reference architecture](/reference-architecture/architectures/sase/) to learn how to plan, deploy, and manage SASE architecture with Cloudflare.
 
@@ -43,15 +43,15 @@ Refer to our [SASE reference architecture](/reference-architecture/architectures
 >
 	Zero Trust dashboard
 </LinkButton><LinkButton
-	variant="secondary"
+	variant="primary"
 	href="/cloudflare-one/implementation-guides/"
 >
 	Implementation guides
 </LinkButton>
 
 ## Products
 
-<RelatedProduct header="Access (Zero Trust Network Access - ZTNA)" href="/cloudflare-one/policies/access/" product="access">
+<RelatedProduct header="Access" href="/cloudflare-one/policies/access/" product="access">
 
 Authenticate users accessing your applications, seamlessly onboard third-party users, and log every event and request.
 
@@ -65,31 +65,31 @@ Securely connect your resources to Cloudflare without exposing a public IP by us
 
 <RelatedProduct header="Secure Web Gateway (SWG)" href="/cloudflare-one/policies/gateway/" product="gateway">
 
-Inspect DNS, network, HTTP, and egress traffic to enforce your company's Acceptable Use Policy (UAP), block risky sites with custom blocklists and threat intelligence, and enhance visibility and protection across SaaS applications.
+Inspect and filter DNS, network, HTTP, and egress traffic to enforce your company's Acceptable Use Policy (UAP), block risky sites with custom blocklists and threat intelligence, and enhance visibility and protection across SaaS applications.
 
 </RelatedProduct>
 
 <RelatedProduct header="WARP" href="/cloudflare-one/connections/connect-devices/warp/" product="warp-client">
 
-Protect corporate devices by securely and privately routing traffic through Cloudflare’s global network while enforcing advanced web filtering and threat protection.
+Protect corporate devices by privately sending traffic from those devices to Cloudflare's global network, build device posture rules, and enforce security policies anywhere.
 
 </RelatedProduct>
 
 <RelatedProduct header="Browser Isolation (RBI)" href="/cloudflare-one/policies/browser-isolation/" product="browser-isolation">
 
-Mitigate the impact of attacks by executing all browser code in the cloud, and deliver a seamless, lightning-fast end user experience.
+Mitigate the impact of attacks by executing all browser code in the cloud and securely browse high-risk or sensitive websites in a remote browser.
 
 </RelatedProduct>
 
 <RelatedProduct header="Cloud Access Security Broker (CASB)" href="/cloudflare-one/applications/casb/" product="casb">
 
-Protect users and sensitive data at rest in SaaS applications, detect insider threats and unsanctioned application usage, also known as <GlossaryTooltip term="shadow IT" link="https://www.cloudflare.com/learning/access-management/what-is-shadow-it/">shadow IT</GlossaryTooltip>, and ensure best practices to prevent data leaks and compliance violations.
+Protect users and sensitive data at rest in SaaS applications and cloud environments, scan for misconfigurations, and detect insider threats as well as unsanctioned application usage to prevent data leaks and compliance violations.
 
 </RelatedProduct>
 
 <RelatedProduct header="Data Loss Prevention (DLP)" href="/cloudflare-one/policies/data-loss-prevention/" product="data-loss-prevention">
 
-Detect sensitive data as it moves to and from SaaS applications, use predefined DLP profiles to get started quickly, and log or block DLP matches.
+Scan your web traffic and SaaS applications for the presence of sensitive data such as social security numbers, financial information, secret keys, and source code.
 
 </RelatedProduct>
 
@@ -112,19 +112,19 @@ Monitor device, network, and application performance across your Zero Trust orga
 <CardGrid>
 
 <LinkTitleCard
-	title="Learning Paths"
+	title="SASE video series"
 	href="/learning-paths/sase-overview-course/series/evolution-corporate-networks-1/"
-	icon="pen"
+	icon="seti:video"
 >
-	New to Zero Trust and SASE? Get started with the SASE introductory learning path.
+	New to Zero Trust and SASE? Get started with our introductory SASE video series.
 </LinkTitleCard>
 
 <LinkTitleCard
 	title="Reference architecture"
 	href="/reference-architecture/architectures/sase/"
 	icon="open-book"
 >
-	Explore our reference architecture to learn how to evolve your network and security architecture to our SASE platform.
+	Explore our reference architecture to learn how to evolve your network and security architecture to Cloudflare One, our SASE platform.
 </LinkTitleCard>
 
 <LinkTitleCard
@@ -142,9 +142,9 @@ Monitor device, network, and application performance across your Zero Trust orga
 </LinkTitleCard>
 
 <LinkTitleCard
-	title="Developer Discord"
-	href="https://discord.cloudflare.com"
-	icon="discord"
+	title="Community"
+	href="https://community.cloudflare.com/"
+	icon="comment-alt"
 >
 	Connect with Cloudflare developers on Discord to ask questions, and share what you
 	are building.