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Author: RebeccaTamachiro

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 As announced on [our blog](https://blog.cloudflare.com/oblivious-dns/), since late 2020, Cloudflare 1.1.1.1 supports Oblivious DNS over HTTPS (ODoH) ([RFC 9230](https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9230.html)).
 
-ODoH is a protocol for performing remote Domain Name System (DNS) resolution via the OHTTPS protocol ([RFC 9230](https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9230.html)), which improves privacy by separating the contents of an HTTP request (and response) from its requester IP address.
+ODoH is a protocol for performing remote Domain Name System (DNS) resolution based on the Oblivious HTTP protocol (OHTTP) ([RFC 9458](https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9458.html)).
 
 ## How ODoH works
 
-Clients
+OHTTP improves privacy by separating the contents of an HTTP request (and response) from its requester IP address. To achieve this in DNS resolution, a proxy and a target are introduced between the client and the upstream DNS resolver:
 
-Proxy
+- The target only has access to the encrypted query and the proxy's IP address.
 
-Target
+- The proxy has no visibility into the DNS messages, with no ability to identify, read, or modify either the query being sent by the client or the answer being returned by the target.
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+- Only the intended target can read the content of the query and produce a response, which is also encrypted.
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+This means that, as long as the proxy and the target do not collude, no single entity can have access to both the DNS messages and the client IP address at the same time. Also, clients are in complete control of proxy and target selection.
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+Additionally, clients encrypt their query for the target using Hybrid Public Key Encryption. A target's public key is obtained via DNS, where it is bundled into a HTTPS resource record and protected by DNSSEC.
 
 ## Cloudflare and third-party products
 
+Cloudflare 1.1.1.1 supports ODoH by acting as a target that can be reached at `odoh.cloudflare-dns.com`.
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+At launch, a few proxy partners included [PCCW](https://www.pccw.com/), [SURF](https://www.surf.nl/), and [Equinix](https://www.equinix.com/).
 
+Finally, open source test clients are available in [Rust](https://github.com/cloudflare/odoh-client-rs) or [Go](https://github.com/cloudflare/odoh-client-go).
 
 ## Related resources
 
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+- [Proving Oblivious HTTP privacy properties](https://blog.cloudflare.com/stronger-than-a-promise-proving-oblivious-http-privacy-properties/) blog post
+- [Privacy Gateway](/privacy-gateway/)