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Author: emily-shen

src/content/docs/workers/wrangler/commands.mdx

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Wrangler offers a number of commands to manage your Cloudflare Workers.
 - [`dispatch-namespace`](#dispatch-namespace) - Interact with a [dispatch namespace](/cloudflare-for-platforms/workers-for-platforms/reference/how-workers-for-platforms-works/#dispatch-namespace).
 - [`mtls-certificate`](#mtls-certificate) - Manage certificates used for mTLS connections.
 - [`types`](#types) - Generate types from bindings and module rules in configuration.
-- [`telemetry`](#telemetry) - Configure whether Wrangler can collect anonymous usage telemetry
+- [`telemetry`](#telemetry) - Configure whether Wrangler can collect anonymous usage data.
 
 :::note
 
@@ -2593,7 +2593,7 @@ The minimum required Wrangler version to use this command is 3.66.0.
 
 Cloudflare collects anonymous usage data to improve Wrangler. You can learn more about this in our [data policy](https://github.com/cloudflare/workers-sdk/tree/main/packages/wrangler/telemetry.md).
 
-You can opt-out of sharing telemetry data at any time using these commands.
+You can manage sharing of usage data at any time using these commands.
 
 ### `disable`
 
@@ -2613,7 +2613,7 @@ wrangler telemetry enable
 
 ### `status`
 
-Check whether telemetry collection is currently enabled.
+Check whether telemetry collection is currently enabled. This will resolve the global status set by `wrangler telemetry disable / enable`, the environment variable [`WRANGLER_SEND_METRICS`](/workers/wrangler/system-environment-variables/#supported-environment-variables) and the [`send_metrics`](/workers/wrangler/configuration/#top-level-only-keys) key in `wrangler.toml`.
 
 ```txt
 wrangler telemetry status

src/content/docs/workers/wrangler/system-environment-variables.mdx

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Wrangler supports the following environment variables:
 
 * `WRANGLER_SEND_METRICS` <Type text="string" /> <MetaInfo text="optional" />
 
-  * Options for this are `true` and `false`, the default behavior is `true`. Controls whether Wrangler can send anonymous usage metrics to Cloudflare for this project. You can learn more about this in our [data policy](https://github.com/cloudflare/workers-sdk/tree/main/packages/wrangler/telemetry.md).
+  * Options for this are `true` and `false`. Defaults to `true`. Controls whether Wrangler can send anonymous usage data to Cloudflare for this project. You can learn more about this in our [data policy](https://github.com/cloudflare/workers-sdk/tree/main/packages/wrangler/telemetry.md).
 
 * `WRANGLER_HYPERDRIVE_LOCAL_CONNECTION_STRING_<BINDING_NAME>`<Type text="string" /> <MetaInfo text="optional" />
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Wrangler supports the following environment variables:
 
 * `WRANGLER_LOG` <Type text="string" /> <MetaInfo text="optional" />
 
-  * Options for Logging levels are `"none"`, `"error"`, `"warn"`, `"info"`, `"log"` and `"debug"`. Levels are case-insensitive and default to `"log"`. If an invalid level is specified, Wrangler will fallback to the default.
+  * Options for Logging levels are `"none"`, `"error"`, `"warn"`, `"info"`, `"log"` and `"debug"`. Levels are case-insensitive and default to `"log"`. If an invalid level is specified, Wrangler will fallback to the default. Logs can include requests to Cloudflare's API, any usage data being collected, and more verbose error logs.
 
 * `FORCE_COLOR` <Type text="string" /> <MetaInfo text="optional" />