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Co-authored-by: Jun Lee <[email protected]>

Author: marciocloudflare

src/content/docs/magic-wan/configuration/connector/configure-hardware-connector/index.mdx

@@ -26,10 +26,10 @@ Contact your account representative to learn more about purchasing options for t
 
 ## DHCP vs static IP connections
 
-Magic WAN Connector uses a DHCP connection at first boot to download your settings and go through the activation process. If you need to use a static IP in your Connector, however, and this is a fresh install:
-1. Connect Magic WAN Connector to a DHCP port with access to the Internet
-2. Go through the [setup flow](#set-up-cloudflare-dashboard) below and activate your Connector
-3. Refer to [WAN with a static IP address](#wan-with-a-static-ip-address)
+Magic WAN Connector uses a DHCP connection at first boot to download your settings and go through the activation process. However, if you need to use a static IP in your Connector, and this is a fresh install:
+1. Connect Magic WAN Connector to a DHCP port with access to the Internet.
+2. Go through the [setup flow](#set-up-cloudflare-dashboard) below and activate your Connector.
+3. Refer to [WAN with a static IP address](#wan-with-a-static-ip-address).
 
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@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ If there is a firewall deployed upstream of the Magic WAN Connector, configure t
 
 ## WAN with a static IP address
 
-After activating your Connector, you can use it in a network configuration with the WAN interface set to a static IP address — that is, an Internet configuration that is not automatically set by DHCP. To use your Connector on a network configuration with a static IP follow the steps below.
+After activating your Connector, you can use it in a network configuration with the WAN interface set to a static IP address — that is, an Internet configuration that is not automatically set by DHCP. To use your Connector on a network configuration with a static IP, follow the steps below.
 
 :::caution
 Before proceeding, make sure that you went through the setup workflow and activated your Magic WAN Connector.

src/content/docs/magic-wan/configuration/connector/configure-virtual-connector.mdx

@@ -33,10 +33,10 @@ Refer to [VMware's documentation](https://docs.vmware.com/en/VMware-vSphere/7.0/
 
 ## DHCP vs static IP connections
 
-Virtual Connector uses a DHCP connection at first boot to download your settings and go through the activation process. If you need to use a static IP in your Virtual Connector, however, and this is a fresh install:
-1. Connect the machine with your Virtual Connector VM to a DHCP port with access to the Internet
-2. Go through the [setup flow](#set-up-cloudflare-dashboard) below and activate your Connector
-3. Refer to [WAN with a static IP address](#wan-with-a-static-ip-address)
+Virtual Connector uses a DHCP connection at first boot to download your settings and go through the activation process. However, if you need to use a static IP in your Virtual Connector, and this is a fresh install:
+1. Connect the machine with your Virtual Connector VM to a DHCP port with access to the Internet.
+2. Go through the [setup flow](#set-up-cloudflare-dashboard) below and activate your Connector.
+3. Refer to [WAN with a static IP address](#wan-with-a-static-ip-address).
 
 ## Obtain the Virtual Connector image
 
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ You cannot use the same license key twice, or reuse a key once the virtual machi
 
 ## WAN with a static IP address
 
-After activating your Virtual Connector, you can use it in a network configuration with the WAN interface set to a static IP address - that is, an Internet configuration that is not automatically set by DHCP. To use your Virtual Connector on a network configuration with a static IP follow the steps below.
+After activating your Virtual Connector, you can use it in a network configuration with the WAN interface set to a static IP address - that is, an Internet configuration that is not automatically set by DHCP. To use your Virtual Connector on a network configuration with a static IP, follow the steps below.
 
 :::caution
 Before proceeding, make sure that you went through the setup workflow and activated your Virtual Connector.

src/content/partials/magic-wan/connector/create-site.mdx

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ Take note of the site `id` parameter, as you will need it to create WANs and LAN
 4. In **VLAN ID**, enter a number between `0` and `4094` to specify a [VLAN ID](/magic-wan/configuration/connector/reference/#vlan-id).
 5. In **Priority**, choose the priority for your WAN. Lower numbers have higher priority. Refer to <GlossaryTooltip term="traffic steering" link="/magic-wan/reference/traffic-steering/">Traffic steering</GlossaryTooltip> to learn more about how Cloudflare calculates priorities.
 6. **Addressing**: Select **DHCP**. This is needed the first time you set up your Connector to successfully download all settings to the machine and activate it. If you need a static IP address in your network environment:
-	1. Continue the set up flow below to activate your Connector
+	1. Continue the set up flow below to activate your Connector.
 	2. Refer to [WAN with a static IP address](#wan-with-a-static-ip-address). If you choose a static IP, you also need to specify the static IP and gateway addresses.
 
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