Workflow example review

Author: ToriLindsay

src/content/docs/workflows/examples/backup-d1.mdx

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 import { TabItem, Tabs } from "~/components"
 
-In this example, we implement a Workflow periodically triggered by a [Cron Trigger](/workers/configuration/cron-triggers) to start a backup for a D1 database using the REST API and finally store the SQL dump in an [R2](/r2) bucket.
+In this example, we implement a Workflow periodically triggered by a [Cron Trigger](/workers/configuration/cron-triggers). That Workflow initiates a backup for a D1 database using the REST API, and then stores the SQL dump in an [R2](/r2) bucket.
 
-Once a Workflow instance is triggered, fetches the REST API to start an export job for a specific database. Then, it fetches the same endpoint to check if the backup job is ready and the SQL dump is available to download.
+When the Workflow is triggered, it fetches the REST API to initiate an export job for a specific database. Then it fetches the same endpoint to check if the backup job is ready and the SQL dump is available to download.
 
-As you can see, Workflows handles the responses and failures. It will retry the API calls until we get a successful response, retry fetching the backup from the URL provided, and retry saving the file to [R2](/r2). The developer doesn't have to care about any of that logic. The workflow can run until the backup file is ready, handling all the possible conditions until it is completed.
+As shown in this example, Workflows handles both the responses and failures, so the developer does not have to. Workflows retries the API calls until it gets a successful response, retries fetching the backup from the URL provided, and then retries saving the file to [R2](/r2). The workflow can run until the backup file is ready, handling all of the possible conditions until it is completed.
 
-This is a simplified example of backing up a [D1](/d1) database. For every step, we use the [default](/workflows/build/sleeping-and-retrying) sleeping and retrying configuration. In a real-life scenario, we would assume more steps and additional logic, but this example gives you a good idea of what you can do with Workflows.
+This example provides simplified steps for backing up a [D1](/d1) database to help you understand the possibilities of Workflows. In every step, it uses the [default](/workflows/build/sleeping-and-retrying) sleeping and retrying configuration. In a real-world scenario, more steps and additional logic would likely be needed.
 
 ```ts
 import {
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 };
 ```
 
-Here's a minimal package.json:
+Here is a minimal package.json:
 
 ```json
 {
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 }
 ```
 
-And finally wrangler.toml:
+Here is a wrangler.toml:
 
 import { WranglerConfig } from "~/components";