Adjustments suggested by @nikitacano

Author: tsmith512

src/content/changelog/stream/2025-08-05-stream-live-observability.mdx

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 date: 2025-08-05
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-New information about broadcast metrics and events is now available in Cloudflare
-Stream in the Live Input details of the Dashboard.
+New information about broadcast metrics and events is now available in
+[Cloudflare Stream](/stream/) in the Live Input details of the Dashboard.
 
 ![Live Input details showing metrics](~/assets/images/changelog/stream/2025-08-05-live-input-metrics.png)
 
-This observability can aid troubleshooting and improving quality, particularly
-for new customers who are just getting started as well as platform customers who
-may have limited knowledge on how their end-users configure their encoders.
+You can now easily understand broadcast-side health and performance with new
+observability, which can help when troubleshooting common issues, particularly
+for new customers who are just getting started and platform customers who may
+have limited visibility into how their end-users configure their encoders.
 
 To get started, start a live stream ([just getting started?](/stream/examples/obs-from-scratch/)), then visit the Live Input details page in Dash.