Apply suggestions from PCX review

Co-authored-by: Jun Lee <[email protected]>

Author: pedrosousa

src/content/docs/waf/analytics/security-analytics.mdx

@@ -69,15 +69,15 @@ To create a [custom rule](/waf/custom-rules/) with an expression based on the fi
 
 ## Main dashboard areas
 
-The [new security dashboard](/security/) and the old dashboard have a few differences, including the order of the different sections on the Security Analytics page.
+The [new security dashboard](/security/) and the old dashboard have a few differences, including the order of the various sections on the Security Analytics page.
 
 ### Suspicious activity
 
 :::note
 Only available in the [new security dashboard](/security/).
 :::
 
-The suspicious activity gives you information about suspicious requests that were identified by the Cloudflare detections you have enabled. The supported detections include:
+The suspicious activity section gives you information about suspicious requests that were identified by the Cloudflare detections you have enabled. The supported detections include:
 
 - [Account takeover](/bots/additional-configurations/detection-ids/#account-takeover-detections)
 - [Leaked credential check](/waf/detections/leaked-credentials/) (only for user and password leaked)