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src/content/docs/cloudflare-one/connections/connect-devices/warp/deployment/manual-deployment.mdx

@@ -80,52 +80,64 @@ The device is now protected by your organization's Zero Trust policies. For more
 
 The device is now protected by your organization's Zero Trust policies.
 
-### Enroll using a QR code
+### Enroll using a URL
 
 <Details header="Feature availability">
 
 | System   | Availability | Minimum WARP version |
 | -------- | ------------ | -------------------- |
-| Windows  | ❌           |                       |
+| Windows  | ❌           |                      |
 | macOS    | ❌           |                      |
 | Linux    | ❌           |                      |
-| iOS      | ✅           | 1.5                   |
-| Android  | ✅           |                      |
-| ChromeOS | ✅           |                      |
+| iOS      | ✅           | 1.10                  |
+| Android  | ✅           | 2.4                   |
+| ChromeOS | ✅           | 2.4                   |
 
 </Details>
 
-Administrators can provide users with a custom login link or QR code that automatically fills in your organization's <GlossaryTooltip term="team name">team name</GlossaryTooltip> during device enrollment. Using a QR code reduces the potential for error that comes with manual entry of the team name.
+Administrators can provide users with a custom login URL that automatically fills in your organization's <GlossaryTooltip term="team name">team name</GlossaryTooltip> during device enrollment. Using a URL reduces the potential for error that comes with manual entry of the team name. The WARP client supports URLs accessed through a direct link or a QR code.
 
-#### Generate a QR code
+#### Generate a login URL
 
-To generate a device enrollment QR code:
+To generate a URL for device enrollment:
 
 1. Copy the following link, replacing `your_team_name` with your Zero Trust <GlossaryTooltip term="team name">team name</GlossaryTooltip>:
 		```txt
 		cf1app://oneapp.cloudflare.com/team?name=your_team_name
 		```
-2. Use any QR code generator to embed the link in a QR code.
-3. Distribute the QR code to users.
+2. (Optional) Use any QR code generator to embed the link in a QR code.
+3. Distribute the link or QR code to users.
 
-#### Use the QR code
+#### Use the login URL
 
-To enroll a device using the QR code:
+To enroll a device using a login URL:
 
 1. [Download](/cloudflare-one/connections/connect-devices/warp/download-warp/) and install the Cloudflare One Agent app.
-2. Scan the QR code provided by your administrator. Alternatively, go to the login link that is embedded in the QR code.
+2. Go to the [login URL](#generate-a-login-url) provided by your account administrator. Direct links and QR code embedded links are supported. To use a QR code, open the QR scanner app on your device and scan the QR code.
 
 		The Cloudflare One Agent app will open and start the onboarding flow.
-3. Review the privacy policy and select **Accept**.
-4. On the **Enter team name** screen, confirm that the pre-populated <GlossaryTooltip term="team name">team name</GlossaryTooltip> matches your organization.
+
+		:::note
+		If the device is already enrolled in this account, Cloudflare One agent will bypass onboarding and show the **Connected** switch.
+		:::
+
+3. To complete the onboarding flow:
+
+		a. Review the privacy policy and select **Accept**.
+
+    b. On the **Enter team name** screen, confirm that the pre-populated <GlossaryTooltip term="team name">team name</GlossaryTooltip> matches your organization.
 
 		:::note[`Already Authenticated` error]
-		If Cloudflare One Agent is already logged in using another team name, you must first log out of that account. Go to **Settings** > **Account** to log out, and then retry the QR code or login link.
+		If Cloudflare One Agent is logged in using another team name, you must first log out of that account. Go to **Settings** > **Account** to log out, and then retry the QR code or login link.
 		:::
-6. Complete the authentication steps required by your organization.
-7. After authenticating, select **Install VPN Profile**.
-8. In the **Connection request** popup window, select **OK**.
-9. If you did not enable [auto-connect](/cloudflare-one/connections/connect-devices/warp/configure-warp/warp-settings/#auto-connect), manually turn on the switch to **Connected**.
+
+    c. Complete the authentication steps required by your organization.
+
+ 		d. After authenticating, select **Install VPN Profile**.
+
+		e. In the **Connection request** popup window, select **OK**.
+
+4. If you did not enable [auto-connect](/cloudflare-one/connections/connect-devices/warp/configure-warp/warp-settings/#auto-connect), manually turn on the switch to **Connected**.
 
 The device is now protected by your organization's Zero Trust policies.