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src/content/docs/learning-paths/mtls/concepts/index.mdx

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-Mutual TLS ([mTLS](https://www.cloudflare.com/learning/access-management/what-is-mutual-tls/)) authentication uses client certificates to ensure traffic between client and server is bidirectionally secure and trusted. mTLS also allows requests that do not authenticate via an identity provider — such as Internet-of-things (IoT) devices — to demonstrate they can reach a given resource.
+Mutual TLS [mTLS](https://www.cloudflare.com/learning/access-management/what-is-mutual-tls/) authentication uses client certificates to ensure traffic between client and server is bidirectionally secure and trusted. mTLS also allows requests that do not authenticate via an identity provider — such as Internet-of-things (IoT) devices — to demonstrate they can reach a given resource.
 
 [TLS (Transport Layer Security)](https://www.cloudflare.com/learning/ssl/transport-layer-security-tls/) is a widely-used protocol to ensure secure communication over a network. It ensures confidentiality and integrity by encrypting data and validating the server using digital certificates.
 

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-In this implementation guide we will be focusing on the L7 / Application Layer security for HTTP/S requests targeting [proxied](/dns/manage-dns-records/reference/proxied-dns-records/) hostnames, including the [first connection](/ssl/origin-configuration/ssl-modes/) between client and Cloudflare. Use Cloudflare Public Key Infrastructure (PKI) to create client certificates.
+In this implementation guide we will be focusing on the L7 / Application Layer security for HTTP/S requests targeting [proxied](/dns/manage-dns-records/reference/proxied-dns-records/) hostnames, including the [first connection](/ssl/origin-configuration/ssl-modes/) between client and Cloudflare.
 
 Some common mTLS use cases are:
-- Protect and verify legitimate API traffic by verifying client certificates they provide during TLS/SSL handshakes.
-- Check IoT devices' identity by verifying client certificates they provide during TLS/SSL handshakes.
+- Protect and verify legitimate API traffic by verifying Client Certificates provided during TLS/SSL handshakes.
+- Check IoT devices' identity by verifying Client Certificates they provide during TLS/SSL handshakes.
 
 There are two main ways to use mTLS at Cloudflare, either by using the Application Security offering (optionally including [API Shield](/api-shield/)) or [Cloudflare Access](/cloudflare-one/policies/access/). Below is a non-exhaustive overview table of their differences: