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Author: Maddy-Cloudflare

src/content/docs/cloudflare-one/email-security/setup/post-delivery-deployment/bcc-journaling/journaling-setup/manual-add.mdx

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ On the **Set up Email Security** page:
 1. **Connect domains**: Select at least one domain. Then, select **Continue**.
 2. (**Optional**) **Add manual domains**: Manually enter additional domains. Then, select **Continue**.
 3. (**Optional**) **Adjust hop count**: Enter the number of <GlossaryTooltip term="Hops">hops</GlossaryTooltip>, and then select **Continue**.
-4. **Configure service address with your third party email provider**: Copy and paste the service address into your third party email provider to allow BCC/Journaling: `<account tag>@CF-emailsecurity.com`
+4. **Configure service address with your third party email provider**: Copy and paste the service address into your third-party email provider to allow BCC/Journaling: `<account tag>@CF-emailsecurity.com`
 5. **Review details**: Review your connected domains. Then, select **Go to domains.** 
 
 ## Users who do not have domains with Cloudflare
@@ -44,5 +44,5 @@ On the **Set up Email Security** page:
 1. **Connect domains**: Select at least one domain. Then, select **Continue**.
 2. (**Optional**) **Add manual domains**: Manually enter additional domains. Then, select **Continue**.
 3. (**Optional**) **Adjust hop count**: Enter the number of <GlossaryTooltip term="Hops">hops</GlossaryTooltip>, and then select **Continue**.
-4. **Configure service address with your third party email provider**: Copy and paste the service address into your third party email provider to allow BCC/Journaling: `<account tag>@CF-emailsecurity.com`.
+4. **Configure service address with your third party email provider**: Copy and paste the service address into your third-party email provider to allow BCC/Journaling: `<account tag>@CF-emailsecurity.com`.
 5. **Review details**: Review your connected domains. Then, select **Go to domains.**

src/content/docs/cloudflare-one/email-security/setup/post-delivery-deployment/bcc-journaling/journaling-setup/office365-journaling.mdx

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ To enable Microsoft 365 journaling deployment:
 3. Select **Email Security**.
 4. Select **Monitoring**: If you have not purchased Email Security, select **Contact Sales**. Otherwise, select **Connect a domain**.
 5. Select **BCC/Journaling**.
-6. Select **Integrate with MS** > Select **Authorize**.
+6. Select **Integrate with MS** > **Authorize**.
 
 ## Integrate with Microsoft O365
 
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ To integrate with Microsoft O365:
 2. **Authorize integration**:
    - Select **Authorize**. Selecting **Authorize** will take you to the **Microsoft Sign in** page where you will have to enter your email address.
    - Once you enter your email address, select **Next**.
-   - After selecting **Next**, the dashboard will show you a dialog box with a list of requested permissions. Select **Accept to authorize Email Security**. Upon authorization, you will be redirected to a page where you can review details and enroll integration.
+   - After selecting **Next**, the dashboard will show you a dialog box with a list of requested permissions. Select **Accept to authorize Email Security**. Upon authorization, you will be redirected to a page where you can review details and enroll the integration.
 3. **Review details**: Review your integration details, then:
    - Select **Complete Email Security set up** where you will be able to connect your domains and configure auto-moves.
    - Select **Continue to Email Security**.
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ On the **Set up Email Security** page:
 2. (**Optional**) **Add manual domains**: Select **Add domain name** to manually enter additional domains. Then, select **Continue**.
 3. (**Optional**) **Adjust hop count**: Enter the number of <GlossaryTooltip term="Hops">hops</GlossaryTooltip>. Then, select **Continue**.
 4. (**Optional**, select **Skip for now** to skip this step) **Move messages**: Refer to [Auto-moves](/cloudflare-one/email-security/auto-moves/) to configure auto-moves. Then, select **Continue**.
-5. **Configure service address with your third party email provider**: Copy and paste the service address into your third party email provider to allow BCC/Journaling: `<account tag>@CF-emailsecurity.com`.
+5. **Configure service address with your third party email provider**: Copy and paste the service address into your third-party email provider to allow BCC/Journaling: `<account tag>@CF-emailsecurity.com`.
 6. **Review details**: Review your connected domains. Then, select **Go to domains.** 
 
 Your domains are now added successfully.