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Author: ranbel

src/content/changelog/casb/2025-10-28-casb-roles.mdx

@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@ Cloudflare CASB (Cloud Access Security Broker) now supports two new granular rol
 * **Cloudflare CASB Read:** Provides read-only access to view CASB findings and dashboards. This role is ideal for security analysts, compliance auditors, or team members who need visibility without modification rights.
 * **Cloudflare CASB:** Provides full administrative access to configure and manage all aspects of the CASB product.
 
-These new roles help you better enforce the principle of least privilege. You can now grant specific users access to CASB security findings without assigning them broader permissions, such as the **Super Administrator** or **Administrator** roles.
+These new roles help you better enforce the principle of least privilege. You can now grant specific members access to CASB security findings without assigning them broader permissions, such as the **Super Administrator** or **Administrator** roles.
 
-To configure [Data Loss Prevention (DLP)](/cloudflare-one/data-loss-prevention/dlp-profiles/), you need to be an admin with the **Cloudflare Zero Trust** role.
+To enable [Data Loss Prevention (DLP)](/cloudflare-one/data-loss-prevention/dlp-profiles/), scans in CASB, account members will need the **Cloudflare Zero Trust** role.
 
 You can find these new roles when inviting members or creating API tokens in the Cloudflare dashboard under **Manage Account** > **Members**.
 
-To learn more about managing user permissions, refer to the [Manage account members and roles documentation](/fundamentals/setup/manage-members/roles/).
+To learn more about managing roles and permissions, refer to the [Manage account members and roles documentation](/fundamentals/setup/manage-members/roles/).