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Co-authored-by: Caley Burton <[email protected]>

Author: kodster28

src/content/docs/style-guide/documentation-content-strategy/component-attributes/screenshots.mdx

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ We only recommend screenshots in [specific scenarios](#when-to-use), as they hav
 
 ## When to use
 
-Use screenshots sparingly and intentionally, often accompanying a simple, but commonly confused task in the Cloudflare dashboard.
+Use screenshots sparingly and intentionally. For example, it's appropriate to use a screenshot when the task is simple but often confuses users or is hard to describe with words alone. 
 
 A canonical example of this would be [Find account and zone ID](/fundamentals/account/find-account-and-zone-ids/) because:
 

src/content/docs/style-guide/how-we-docs/index.mdx

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ import { DirectoryListing } from "~/components";
 
 This section shares how Cloudflare approaches docs strategically, covering topics like `how we built our site` and `how we think about redirects`.
 
-The goal is twofold, because it:
+The goal is twofold because it:
 
 - Encourages deep thinking about how we approach things (and if they could be better).
 - Contributes back to the open-source ecosystem. We get a lot of benefits from being open source and we want to give back.

src/content/docs/style-guide/how-we-docs/links.mdx

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Of these three [link types](#link-types), only **Internal** links:
 - Universally lead to a bad customer experience (a `404` page).
 - Are easily auditable within the current context.
 
-For these reasons, we choose to **fail** a build based on broken internal links. For our implementation, we rely on the [Starlight link validator plugin](https://github.com/HiDeoo/starlight-links-validator).
+For these reasons, we choose to make a build **fail** based on broken internal links. For our implementation, we rely on the [Starlight link validator plugin](https://github.com/HiDeoo/starlight-links-validator).
 
 <GitHubCode
 	repo="cloudflare/cloudflare-docs"
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ We also make two intentional decisions about this link auditing:
 
 Though external links are not good for the customer experience, they also don't change within the context of a change to your site's content. Additionally, external link checking can be time consuming and error prone, which can slow down contributions.
 
-We use an external SEO tool to help flag these broken external links for us, addressing them as needed (instead of failing a build on them).
+We use an external SEO tool to help flag these broken external links for us, addressing them as needed (instead of making a build fail because of them).
 
 ### Anchor links