refined loa text

Author: marciocloudflare

src/content/docs/network-interconnect/get-started.mdx

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ The process of provisioning a CNI typically takes two to four weeks, depending o
    - required port speeds (10G or 100G)
    - BGP ASN for Peering/Magic Transit
    - BGP password (optional)
-2. **Order Cross-Connect**: Cloudflare will issue a Letter of Authorization (LOA). This document grants you permission to order a physical cross-connect between your equipment and a specific port on Cloudflare's hardware within the data center. This process can take one to two weeks or more, depending on the facility provider. Cloudflare's demarcation is the port that is specified in the LOA: you are responsible for the deployment, provisioning and ongoing support and operation of this connection and the commercial relationships with the facility provider and any third-party connectivity providers.
+2. **Order Cross-Connect**: Cloudflare will issue a Letter of Authorization (LOA). This document grants you permission to order a physical cross-connect between your equipment and a specific port on Cloudflare's hardware within the data center. The end-to-end process for ordering a cross-connect can take one to two weeks or more, depending on the facility provider. Cloudflare's demarcation is the port that is specified in the LOA: you are responsible for the deployment, provisioning and ongoing support and operation of this connection, and the commercial relationships with the facility provider and any third-party connectivity providers.
 
 ### How-To: Provision a Partner Interconnect