[Zero Trust Devices] Address review comments

Author: marcinflare

src/content/release-notes/api-deprecations.yaml

@@ -8,14 +8,16 @@ entries:
   - publish_date: "2025-04-14"
     title: "Zero Trust Devices"
     description: |-
-      End of life date: November 25, 2025
+      Deprecation date: April 14, 2025
+
+      End of life date: November 11, 2025
 
       We are changing the definition of Devices. Devices are going to represent the real-world machines while
       the relation between Users and Devices will be represented by a new concept - Registrations.
 
-      As a result multiple fields are moving from Device to Registration and we're deprecating the endpoints listed below.
+      As a result multiple fields are moving from Devices to Registrations and we are deprecating the endpoints listed below.
 
-      The deprecated endpoints are not supported on accounts with [multi-user mode](https://developers.cloudflare.com/cloudflare-one/connections/connect-devices/warp/deployment/mdm-deployment/windows-multiuser/#enable-multi-user-mode) enabled.
+      The deprecated endpoints are not supported on accounts with [multi-user mode](/cloudflare-one/connections/connect-devices/warp/deployment/mdm-deployment/windows-multiuser/) enabled.
 
       Deprecated API: