Text review: remove repeated word and avoid passive voice

Author: RebeccaTamachiro

src/content/docs/dns/zone-setups/reference/domain-status.mdx

@@ -86,14 +86,14 @@ Your domain has failed multiple DNS checks, where either the Cloudflare nameserv
 
 ### Expected behavior for different plans
 
-If your domain is on the Free plan, it will be automatically deleted after 7 days after it entered the moved status.
+If your domain is on the Free plan, it will be automatically deleted 7 days after it entered the moved status.
 
 For moved zones with a paid plan (Pro, Business, Enterprise), deletion will occur after 7 days if any of the following is observed:
 
 - The paid plan is removed.
 - The domain is activated in another Cloudflare account.
 
-Domain can also be [manually removed](/fundamentals/manage-domains/remove-domain/) from Cloudflare.
+You can also [manually remove](/fundamentals/manage-domains/remove-domain/) your domain from Cloudflare.
 
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