Update src/current/_includes/releases/v25.4/v25.4.0.md

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Co-authored-by: Florence Morris <[email protected]>

Author: mikeCRL

src/current/_includes/releases/v25.4/v25.4.0.md

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     <p class="feature-summary">Metrics Viewer Role for CockroachDB Cloud</p>
     <p class="feature-description" markdown="1">
-      This release introduces the Metrics Viewer role on CockroachDB Cloud, providing dedicated permissions for metrics collection and insights. This role is designed to enhance overall security by enabling granular access control to cluster performance data.
+      This release introduces the Metrics Viewer role in CockroachDB Cloud, which provides dedicated permissions for collecting metrics and viewing insights. The role enhances security by enabling granular access to cluster performance data.
 
       The Metrics Viewer role grants read-only access to cluster metrics and related insights, without conferring any administrative or data manipulation privileges.
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