Update gabbys-guide-to-cold-emailing-when-we-werent-even-hiring.mdx

Author: sonnynomnom

blogs/2026/gabbys-guide-to-cold-emailing-when-we-werent-even-hiring.mdx

@@ -165,13 +165,12 @@ To further hone in on my interest, I made a list of sample tasks I could do for
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-### Closing
+### Closing: Email Signature
 
 ![closing](https://i.imgur.com/5grPBZI.png)
-<Caption text="Professional." />
+<Caption text="Clean." />
 
-Optional, but adding an email signature feels extra professional! There are lots of templates online to build one, but you can just make one with fonts you like in Google Docs and paste them in your email app. 
+Optional, but adding an email signature feels extra professional! You can use an online template or design one in Google Docs with fonts you like and paste it into your email app.
 
 ### Get a second pair of eyes to look it over
 
@@ -226,7 +225,7 @@ In Sonny's [recent keynote at HackUTD](https://www.instagram.com/p/DRI59z2j6tx),
 
 ### Highlighting Urgency (In My Case)
 
-At this point, I was in communication with other companies, but Codédex was still my #1 priority. I needed to figure out plans sooner rather than later, so I emphasized that I needed clarity as soon as possible. 
+At this point, I was in communication with other companies, but Codédex was still my #1 priority. I needed to figure out plans sooner rather than later, so I emphasized that I needed clarity as ASAP. 
 
 I’ve heard some people say that saying that you have options will make companies want you more, even if it’s not true. Do this at your own risk. 🤷‍♀️