Update github-copilot-partnership.mdx

Author: sonnynomnom

blogs/2025/github-copilot-partnership.mdx

@@ -94,11 +94,11 @@ Whether you're curious about Copilot or just want to hang out, I'd love to see y
 
 ![workshop](https://i.imgur.com/O6blcmE.png)
 
-On Tuesday, October 14th at 3 pm EST, join us for a GitHub Copilot: Information Session in our Discord, led by our good friend **Pj Metz**, Program Manager @ GitHub.
+On Tuesday, October 14th at 3 pm EST, join us in our Discord for a GitHub Copilot Information Session, led by our good friend **Pj Metz**, Program Manager @ GitHub.
 
-It’s the perfect chance to see Copilot in action and ask questions. Mark your calendars!
+It’s the perfect opportunity to see Copilot in action and ask questions. Mark your calendars!
 
-**Edit:** Here's the recording video if you missed the event:
+**Edit:** Here's the event recording in case you missed it.
 
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