Update back-to-school-campus-tour-2024

Author: sonnynomnom

blogs/back-to-school-campus-tour-2024

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-**Edit:** We just completed our tour! Scroll to the bottom for the <a href="#update">recap update</a>.
+**Edit:** We just completed #CodedexCampusTour! Scroll to the bottom for the <a href="#update">recap update</a>.
 
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 We just wrapped up our #CodedexCampusTour! 🥹 Wow, wow, WOW.
 
-It was beyond our expectations. SO awesome to meet so many of you face to face and chat about tech, startups, learn to code, CS, Codédex, and everything in between.
+It was beyond our expectations. SO awesome to meet so many of you face to face and chat about tech, startups, learn to code, CompSci, Codédex, and everything in between.
 
 Still can't believe there were lines around the block at some of the events. 🫶
 
-Here are Naomi's recap on Instagram:
+In case you missed it, here are Naomi's recaps on Instagram:
 
 - 📍 Stop 1 - HackMIT @ **MIT**: [vlog](https://www.instagram.com/p/DACLunXOwa3), [street interview 1](https://www.instagram.com/p/DAJuD94SMmF), [street interview 2](https://www.instagram.com/p/DAWHGa7u6Mn), [meme](https://www.instagram.com/p/C_83E3Ky8TT)
 - 📍 Stop 2 - Pizza Party @ **NYU**: [carousel](https://www.instagram.com/p/DAT3ZxgSoh1/?img_index=1)