Proof reading workshop info intro to python

Author: liamjberrisford

programme_information/intro_to_python.ipynb

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     "Python is one of the most popular general-purpose programming languages around. It is used in a huge range of applications, from building systems incorporating cutting-edge machine learning, such as in self-driving cars, to building web applications with hundreds of millions of users, as seen in Instagram. As researchers, we use Python for all manner of tasks, from data analysis, to automation, to prototyping software, to creating engaging visuals for websites and publications. Like you, we started our journey into Python learning the basics, building a strong foundation for achieving these more complex tasks. This introductory course will teach you these basics, and get you up to speed on your own programming journeys.\n",
     "\n",
     "## Course Objectives\n",
-    "- Understand and declare the basic data types in Python\n",
-    "- Understand the basic principles of control flow and for loops\n",
-    "- Describe what a function is and define one that takes user-specified parameters\n",
-    "- Perform simple data analysis/visualisation of a table of data\n",
-    "- Recognise concepts in other programming languages\n",
+    "- Understand and declare the basic data types in Python.\n",
+    "- Understand the basic principles of control flow and for loops.\n",
+    "- Describe what a function is and define one that takes user-specified parameters.\n",
+    "- Perform simple data analysis/visualisation of a table of data.\n",
+    "- Recognise concepts in other programming languages.\n",
     "\n",
     "## Pre-requisite Knowledge\n",
     "\n",
     "No pre-requisite knowledge needed. However, course attendees will need to follow our setup guide to install Python and JupyterLab, which we will use for the course.\n",
     "\n",
     "## Installation Guide \n",
     "\n",
+    "All CfRR courses require attendees to use their own computer/laptop to follow workshop activities and take effective notes. \n",
+    "\n",
     "### Introduction\n",
     "\n",
     "For this course, attendees will need to install the programming language Python,\n",
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     "how to setup Python with VSCode at\n",
     "[python-tutorial](https://code.visualstudio.com/docs/python/python-tutorial).\n",
     "\n",
-    "To check that you have everything installed open VSCode. Then open a\n",
+    "To check that you have everything installed, open VSCode. Then open a\n",
     "terminal window in VSCode (Terminal -> 'New Terminal').\n",
     "\n",
     "In this terminal type ```python --version```. If you see something similar to the following,\n",
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     "Python 3...\n",
     "```\n",
     "\n",
-    "### Help\n",
-    "\n",
-    "Please have a go at installing Anaconda yourself. If you are struggling, we will\n",
-    "be holding an online drop-in before the first session. An email\n",
-    "link to this drop-in session will be made available to you once your registration\n",
-    "on the course has been confirmed.\n",
-    "\n",
     "#### FAQ\n",
     "\n",
     "- My browser isn't showing anything and I cannot change browser!\n",
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     "\n",
     "## Course Delivery Content \n",
     "\n",
-    "There are currently no additional content that is used outside of the self study notes to deliver this course.\n",
+    "There is currently no additional content that is used outside of the self-study notes to deliver this course.\n",
     "\n",
     "## License Info \n"
    ]