Proof reading workshop info advanced regression

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programme_information/advanced_regression_analysis_with_r.ipynb

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     "\n",
     "## Course Description \n",
     "\n",
-    "Welcome to Advanced Regression Analysis with R. Our aim is to build on your existing knowledge of regression to fit more complex models that can handle more complicated data sets. In this session you will learn about different types of regression analysis, when to use them and how to interpret the results.\n",
+    "This course builds on your existing knowledge of regression to fit more complex models that can handle more complicated data sets. In this session you will learn about different types of regression analysis, when to use them, and how to interpret the results.\n",
     "\n",
     "## Course Objectives \n",
     "-   Use regression answer to answer a wide range of research questions.\n",
-    "-   Be able to fit a regression model with interactions between predictor variables.\n",
-    "-   Be able to fit multi-level regression models.\n",
-    "-   Be able to extract and summarise the results from a range of regression models.\n",
-    "-   Be able to design a regression model appropriate for addressing their specific research question.\n",
+    "-   Learn to fit a regression model with interactions between predictor variables.\n",
+    "-   Learn to fit multi-level regression models.\n",
+    "-   Extract and summarise the results from a range of regression models.\n",
+    "-   Learn to design a regression model appropriate for the participant's specific research question.\n",
     "\n",
     "## Pre-requisite Knowledge\n",
     "\n",
     "This course will not include an introduction to R, or how to setup and use R or Rstudio. It is assumed you are comfortable coding in R and are familiar with:\n",
     "\n",
-    "-   how to write and execute commands in the R console\n",
-    "-   what type of variables are available in R and how to work with these\n",
+    "-   How to write and execute commands in the R console.\n",
+    "-   What type of variables are available in R and how to work with these.\n",
     "\n",
     "We also assume that you are comfortable with fitting in R and interpreting the output of:\n",
     "\n",
-    "-   simple linear regression\n",
-    "-   multiple linear regression with categorical, binary or continuous predictor variables\n",
-    "-   logistic regression\n",
+    "-   Simple linear regression.\n",
+    "-   Multiple linear regression with categorical, binary or continuous predictor variables.\n",
+    "-   Logistic regression.\n",
     "\n",
-    "If not we recommend that you consult our pre-requisite course [Introductory Regression Analysis with R](regression_analysis_with_r.ipynb).\n",
+    "If not, we recommend that you consult our pre-requisite course [Introductory Regression Analysis with R](regression_analysis_with_r.ipynb).\n",
     "\n",
     "## Installation Guide \n",
+    "All CfRR courses require attendees to use their own computer/laptop to follow workshop activities and take effective notes. \n",
     "\n",
-    "As this course extends upon Regression Analysis with R, the installation instructions for this course are the same, available [here](advanced_regression_analysis_with_r.ipynb).\n",
+    "As this course extends upon *Regression Analysis with R*, the installation instructions for this course are the same, available [here](advanced_regression_analysis_with_r.ipynb).\n",
     "\n",
     "\n",
     "## Self Study Material Link \n",

programme_information/regression_analysis_with_r.ipynb

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     "\n",
     "All CfRR courses require attendees to use their own computer/laptop to follow workshop activities and take effective notes. \n",
     "\n",
-    "As this course extends upon Introduction to R, the installation instructions for the base R elements are the same, available [here](intro_to_r.ipynb).\n",
+    "As this course extends upon *Introduction to R*, the installation instructions for the base R elements are the same, available [here](intro_to_r.ipynb).\n",
     "\n",
     "Alongside having R itself, three packages are needed for this workshop. The first two (devtools & learnr) are available from CRAN. The third is a package we have developed with the course materials and is available from GitHub (cfrrRTutorials).\n",
     "\n",