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Author: crandmck

docs/manifest/cawg-id.md

@@ -8,20 +8,17 @@ The CAWG identity assertion enables a credential holder to prove control over a
 
 There are two different ways to provide identity assertions:
 
-- Using an [X.509 certificate](https://cawg.io/identity/1.1/#_x_509_certificates_and_cose_signatures) to sign the identity claims. Enterprises or large organizations might often want to use this approach to assert their identity in a particular trust ecosystem; for example, a news organization or publisher.
-  :::info
-  The SDK can validate and sign these claims.
-  :::
-- Using an [identity claim aggregator](https://cawg.io/identity/1.1/#_identity_claims_aggregation). Individuals might often want to use this approach.
-  :::info
-  The SDK can validate these claims only.  Signing is not currently supported.
-  :::
+- Using an [X.509 certificate](https://cawg.io/identity/1.1/#_x_509_certificates_and_cose_signatures) to sign the identity claims. Enterprises or large organizations can use this approach to assert their identity in a particular trust ecosystem; for example, a news organization or publisher. The SDK can validate and sign these claims.
+- Using an [identity claim aggregator](https://cawg.io/identity/1.1/#_identity_claims_aggregation).  Individuals can use this approach to document their role in creating an asset by using identity signals collected and verified by a third-party aggregator. The SDK can validate these claims only.  Signing is not supported.
 
-## Verified identities
 
-As defined in the [CAWG Identity Assertion technical specification](https://cawg.io/identity/1.1-draft/#_identity_claims_aggregation), 
+## Using an X.509 certificate
 
-Content creators may wish to document their role in creating an asset using common identity signals such as:
+TBD
+
+## Using an identity claim aggregator
+
+As defined in the [CAWG Identity Assertion technical specification](https://cawg.io/identity/1.1/#_identity_claims_aggregation), content creators may wish to document their role in creating an asset using common identity signals such as:
 - Verified web sites
 - Social media accounts
 - Official ID documentation