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Update governance.md

Author: kpd17

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-# Governance on the Core Chain
+# Governance on the Core Blockchain
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-Core Chain's governance system is designed to ensure a decentralized and democratic management of the Core Chain network. It empowers the community to actively participate in decision-making processes that shape the ecosystem's future, from protocol changes to feature implementations and more. This section outlines the governance structure of the Core Chain ecosystem.
+Core's governance system is designed to uphold the decentralization and reliability of the Core network. It empowers the community to actively participate in decision-making processes that shape the ecosystem's future, from protocol changes to feature implementations and more. This section outlines the governance structure underlying Core.
 
 ## Progressive Decentralization Strategy
 
-The Core Chain's governance is designed to evolve over time, with a phased approach that begins with necessary centralization for network establishment and progressively hands over control to the community as it grows and stabilizes.
+The Core blockchain's governance is designed to evolve over time, with a phased approach that begins with necessary centralization for network establishment and progressively hands over control to the community as it grows and stabilizes.
 
 * **Stage 1: Offchain Governance**
     - Proposals and decisions are conducted offchain through Core Improvement Proposals (CIPs).
     - Community members, regardless of their stake size, can submit proposals for consideration.
-    - A majority vote determines the outcome of each proposal, with a voting period of seven days to ensure community participation.
+    - A majority vote determines the outcome of each proposal, with a voting period of seven days to enable community participation.
 
 * **Stage 1.5: Current Hybrid Model**
     - Represents a midpoint between offchain governance and the goal of partial onchain governance.
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 * **Stage 3: Full Onchain Governance (Goal)**
     - Details for this stage are currently being developed with active community participation.
-    - Plans include mechanisms such as requiring collateral to post proposals, ensuring that proposers have a vested interest in the network's health and longevity.
+    - Plans include mechanisms such as requiring collateral to post proposals, so that proposers have a vested interest in the network's health and longevity.
 
 
 ## Current State of Governance
 
-Core Chain's governance is currently in transition, situated at Stage 1.5, with the objective of reaching Stage 3, which represents full decentralization. Governance is facilitated through the CORE token, empowering the community to guide the development and direction of the Core Chain.
+Core's governance is currently in transition, situated at Stage 1.5, with the objective of reaching Stage 3, which represents full decentralization. Governance is facilitated through the CORE token, empowering the community to guide the development and direction of Core.
 
 ## Governance Oversight
 
-In the current governance model of Core Chain, The Core team, together with the Core community, is tasked with overseeing the network. Responsibilities include, but are not limited to, expanding the validator set, adjusting governance parameters, and determining the percentage of block rewards and transaction fees that are burned. For more details on proposed and implemented improvements related to governance of Core Chain, visit the [official Core Chain Governance Website](https://gov.coredao.org/).
+In Core's current governance model of Core, Core contributors and community members are tasked with overseeing the early development of the network. Responsibilities include, but are not limited to expanding the validator set, adjusting governance parameters, and determining the percentage of block rewards and transaction fees that are burned. For more details on proposed and implemented improvements related to governance of Core, visit the [official Core Governance Website](https://gov.coredao.org/).
 
 ## Conclusion
 
-The governance framework of Core Chain embodies a phased approach, beginning with offchain governance and advancing through stages towards full onchain governance. By adapting to the evolving needs and maturity of the network, Core Chain aims to foster a strong, decentralized, and active community governance model. This gradual transition ensures that Core Chain can maintain security, stability, and user trust, while progressively enhancing community control and participation in its governance processes.
+Core's governance framework embodies a phased approach, beginning with offchain governance and advancing through stages towards full onchain governance. By adapting to the evolving needs and maturity of the network, Core aims to host a strong, decentralized, and active community governance model. This gradual transition is designed to maintain Core's security, stability, and user trust, while progressively enhancing community control and participation in its governance processes.