Applied improvements recommended by rachel lee

Author: wpeck-amplify

src/pages/console/adminui/start.mdx

@@ -7,25 +7,34 @@ AWS Amplify Studio is a visual development environment for building fullstack we
 
 Amplify Studio is available in the following regions: [Amplify Studio service endpoints](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/general/latest/gr/amplify.html#amplifyadmin_region).
 
-## Get started with Amplify Studio
+## Quick Start Guide
 
 <BlockSwitcher>
 
-<Block name="Get started without an AWS account">
+<Block name="Build without an AWS account">
 
-If you are new to AWS, you don't need an AWS account to get started. Visit the [Amplify Studio Sandbox](https://sandbox.amplifyapp.com/), where you can build and test your data model, and build React forms, all without logging into AWS.
+If you are new to AWS, you don't need an account to get started. Visit the [Amplify Studio Sandbox](https://sandbox.amplifyapp.com/), where you can model your data and build React forms, all without logging into AWS.
 
 <InternalLinkButton href="https://sandbox.amplifyapp.com/">
   <span slot="text">Explore the Sandbox</span>
 </InternalLinkButton>
 
 </Block>
 
-<Block name="Get started with your AWS account">
+<Block name="Create an AWS account">
 
-If you already have an AWS account, you can begin using all of Amplify Studio's features. After you deploy a backend in Amplify, you can launch Studio from your Amplify project. [Your entire team can use Studio](access-management/#to-invite-team-members-to-access-a-project) to add new features, update app data, and manage users and groups.
+To use all of Amplify Studio's functionality, you will need an AWS account. You can take advantage of the [AWS free tier]("https://aws.amazon.com/free") to get started with no cost.
+
+<InternalLinkButton href="https://portal.aws.amazon.com/gp/aws/developer/registration/index.html?refid=78b916d7-7c94-4cab-98d9-0ce5e648dd5f">
+  <span slot="text">Create an AWS Account</span>
+</InternalLinkButton>
+
+</Block>
+
+<Block name="Build a fullstack app">
+
+If you already have an AWS account, you can begin using all of Amplify Studio's features. [Log into the AWS console]("https://console.aws.amazon.com/console/home"), and click the button below to create a new project in Amplify Studio
 
-To start using Studio, create a new project in Amplify
 <InternalLinkButton href="https://console.aws.amazon.com/amplify/home?#/deploy-backend">
   <span slot="text">Create New Project</span>
 </InternalLinkButton>
@@ -39,16 +48,39 @@ Next, follow these steps to deploy and launch Amplify Studio:
 
 </BlockSwitcher>
 
-### Log into Studio
-If you have an existing Amplify project with Studio already provisioned, you can log into Studio via the following steps:
-1. Navigate to the [AWS Amplify Console](https://console.aws.amazon.com/amplify/home)
+## Logging In and Creating an App
+
+### Log into the Amplify Console
+The Amplify Console is where you build, manage, and host your Amplify applications. To log in, take the following steps:
+1. [Log into the AWS console]("https://console.aws.amazon.com/console/home")
+1. Search for **AWS Amplify** in the console
+1. Select **AWS Amplify** to open the Amplify Console
+
+Alternatively, [click here to go straight to the Amplify Console]("https://console.aws.amazon.com/amplify/home")
+
+### Create a new Studio app
+To create a new Studio app, first log into the [Amplify Console]("https://console.aws.amazon.com/amplify/home"). Once you've logged in, you can create a new app using the following steps:
+
+*If you have no apps in this region...*
+1. Scroll to the bottom of the page
+1. In the Amplify Studio section, select ["Get started"]("https://console.aws.amazon.com/amplify/home?#/deploy-backend")
+1. Name your app, and select **Confirm Deployment**
+
+*If you already have apps in this region...*
+1. Select **New app** in the upper right-hand corner
+1. Select **Build an app** from the dropdown menu
+1. Name your app, and select **Confirm Deployment**
+
+### Launch Studio
+To launch Amplify Studio for your app, take the following steps:
+1. Log into the [AWS Amplify Console](https://console.aws.amazon.com/amplify/home)
 1. Select your app from the list of apps
 1. Select the **Backend environments** tab
 1. Select **Launch Studio**
 
 <Callout info>
 
-Is your app missing from the list? Make sure the correct region is selected in the upper right-hand corner
+**Is your app missing from the list?** Make sure the correct region is selected in the upper right-hand corner
 
 </Callout>
 
@@ -68,3 +100,4 @@ If you have [created a new Amplify project through the CLI](/cli/start/workflows
 You are ready to start creating and managing your application's backend in Amplify Studio. Recommended next steps:
   * [Build a data model](/console/data/data-model)
   * [Create UI components in Figma](/console/uibuilder/figmatocode/)
+  * [Invite your team members to collaborate](access-management/)