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 # Outreach Plan
 
-Broad engagement with the neuroscience community is necessary for the optimization,
-integration, and adoption of the Resource components.
-
-We conduct five types of outreach activities that require different approaches:
+Broad engagement with the neuroscience community is essential for the optimization,
+integration, and adoption of the Resource components. To achieve this, we conduct five
+types of outreach activities, each requiring a tailored approach:
 
 ## 1. Precursor Projects
 
-Our [Selection Process](../selection) requires a "Precursor Project" for any new
-experiment modality to be included in DataJoint Elements. A precursor project is a
-project that develops a DataJoint pipeline for its own experiments either independently
-or in collaboration with our team. We reach out to teams who develop DataJoint
-pipelines for new experiment paradigms and modalities to identify essential design
-motifs, analysis tools, and related tools and interfaces. We interview the core team to
-learn about their collaborative culture, practices, and procedures. We jointly review
-their open-source code and their plans for dissemination. In many cases, our team
-already collaborates with such teams through our other projects and we have a good
-understanding of their process. As we develop a new Element to support the new
-modality, we remain in contact with the team to include their contribution, solicit
-feedback, and evaluate design tradeoffs. When the new Element is released, a full
-attribution is given to the Precursor Project.
-
-**Rationale:** The Resource does not aim to develop fundamentally new solutions for
-  neurophysiology data acquisition and analysis. Rather it aims to systematize and
-  disseminate existing open-source tools proven in leading research projects.
+As part of our [Selection Process](../selection), a Precursor Project is required for
+any new experimental modality to be incorporated into DataJoint Elements.
+
+A Precursor Project involves the development of a DataJoint pipeline for specific
+experiments, either independently or in collaboration with our team. Our outreach
+activities for Precursor Projects include:
+
+- Engaging Development Teams: Reaching out to teams developing DataJoint pipelines for
+  new experimental paradigms or modalities.
+- Identifying Key Components: Collaborating with these teams to identify essential
+  design motifs, analysis tools, and related interfaces.
+- Team Interviews: Conducting interviews the core team to understand their collaborative
+  culture, practices, and procedures.
+- Code and Dissemination Review: Reviewing their open-source code and dissemination
+  plans to assess compatibility and adaptability.
+- Continuous Collaboration: Staying in contact with the team throughout the Element
+  development process to incorporate their contributions, gather feedback, and evaluate
+  design tradeoffs.
+
+When the new Element is released, a full attribution is given to the Precursor Project,
+ensuring their contributions are recognized.
+
+**Rationale:** The Resource does not aim to create fundamentally new solutions for
+neurophysiology data acquisition and analysis. Instead, it systematizes and disseminates
+existing open-source tools already proven in leading research projects.
 
 ## 2. Tool Developers
 
-DataJoint pipelines rely on analysis tools, atlases, data standards, archives and
-catalogs, and other neuroinformatics resources developed and maintained by the broader
-scientific community. To ensure sustainability of the Resource, we reach out to the
-tool developer to establish joint sustainability roadmaps.
+DataJoint pipelines depend on a variety of analysis tools, atlases, data standards,
+archives, catalogs, and other neuroinformatics resources created and maintained by the
+broader scientific community. To ensure the long-term sustainability of the Resource, we
+reach out to the tool developers to establish shared sustainability roadmaps.