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Co-authored-by: Richard Hendricks <[email protected]>

Author: msmygit

OpsCenter_6.8_Release_Notes.md

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 ## Backup Service
 * Added support for picking individual tables when creating a backup. (OPSC-17084)
-* Updated aws sdk version. Aws cli will now be used for bucket validation if `use_s3_cli` is true. This resolves issues when using some generic S3 providers such as Cloudian. (OPSC-17639)
+* Updated the AWS SDK version to `aws-java-sdk-s3:1.12.779`. To use the AWS CLI for bucket validation, set the `use_s3_cli` option to `true`. This option resolves issues when using some generic S3 providers, such as Cloudian. (OPSC-17639)
 
 ## Core
-* Upgraded Apache Directory LDAP API to version `1.0.3` and Apache MINA to version `2.0.27` to address potential security vulnerability. (OPSC-17655)
+* Upgraded the Apache Directory LDAP API to version `1.0.3` and the Apache MINA core library to version `2.0.27` to address a potential security vulnerability. (OPSC-17655)
 
 # Release Notes for OpsCenter 6.8.41
 26 November 2024