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‎app/views/current/quick-share-upload-multiple.html‎

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<fieldset class="nhsuk-fieldset">
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<legend class="nhsuk-fieldset__legend nhsuk-fieldset__legend--l">
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<h1 class="nhsuk-fieldset__heading">
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Upload your document
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Upload your documents
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</h1>
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</legend>
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<p>Then, give us a few details to help other trusts find it.</p>
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<p>Then, give us a few details to help other trusts find them.</p>
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<div class="nhsuk-hint">
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Formats accepted: PDF, Word, Excel
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</div>
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<div class="nhsuk-form-group">
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<label class="nhsuk-label" for="file-upload">
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Choose files to upload
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Choose file to upload
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</label>
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<div class="nhsuk-hint" id="file-upload-hint">
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Maximum 10MB per file
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<!-- Alternative: Link to resource -->
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<div class="nhsuk-u-margin-top-4 nhsuk-u-margin-bottom-4">
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<p class="nhsuk-body-s nhsuk-u-secondary-text-color" style="text-align: center;">
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<strong>OR, alternatively</strong>
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<strong>OR</strong>
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</p>
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</div>
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<fieldset class="nhsuk-fieldset">
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<legend class="nhsuk-fieldset__legend nhsuk-fieldset__legend--m">
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<h2 class="nhsuk-fieldset__heading">
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How many products are evaluated in this document?
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How many products are evaluated in this upload?
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</h2>
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</legend>
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<div class="nhsuk-hint">
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{{ input({
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label: { text: "Your trust", classes: "nhsuk-label--s" },
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label: { text: "Trust name", classes: "nhsuk-label--s" },
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id: "trust-name-1",
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name: "trust-name[1]",
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label: { text: "Lead clinician or contact person (optional)", classes: "nhsuk-label--s" },
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label: { text: "Evaluation lead (optional)", classes: "nhsuk-label--s" },
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id: "lead-clinician-1",
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name: "lead-clinician[1]",
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hint: { text: "Name of the clinician who led or supervised this evaluation" }
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hint: { text: "Name of the person who led or supervised this evaluation" }
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{{ input({
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label: { text: "Trust name", classes: "nhsuk-label--s" },
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label: { text: "Evaluation lead (optional)", classes: "nhsuk-label--s" },
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id: "lead-clinician-2",
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name: "lead-clinician[2]",
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hint: { text: "Name of the person who led or supervised this evaluation" }
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<input class="nhsuk-radios__input" id="not-procured-reason-1b" name="not-procured-reason-1" type="radio" value="under-review">
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1b">Still under review – decision not made yet</label>
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1b">We're still reviewing it and haven't decided</label>
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<div class="nhsuk-radios__item">
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<input class="nhsuk-radios__input" id="not-procured-reason-1c" name="not-procured-reason-1" type="radio" value="stopped-using">
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1c">We stopped using it after a trial or pilot</label>
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<input class="nhsuk-radios__input" id="not-procured-reason-1d" name="not-procured-reason-1" type="radio" value="budget">
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1d">Budget or funding constraints</label>
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1d">We have budget or funding constraints</label>
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1e">Other reason</label>
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1e">Another reason</label>
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<input class="nhsuk-radios__input" id="not-procured-reason-1a" name="not-procured-reason-1" type="radio" value="decided-against">
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-2b">Still under review – decision not made yet</label>
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<input class="nhsuk-radios__input" id="not-procured-reason-1b" name="not-procured-reason-1" type="radio" value="under-review">
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1b">We're still reviewing it and haven't decided</label>
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-2c">We stopped using it after a trial or pilot</label>
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1c">We stopped using it after a trial or pilot</label>
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<label class="nhsuk-label nhsuk-radios__label" for="not-procured-reason-1d">We have budget or funding constraints</label>
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<input class="nhsuk-radios__input" id="not-procured-reason-1e" name="not-procured-reason-1" type="radio" value="other">
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