999: Edit circuits.mdx

Author: bethh0rn

docs/infrastructure-management/connectivity/circuits.mdx

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ sidebar_position: 2
 import ThemedImage from '@theme/ThemedImage';
 import useBaseUrl from '@docusaurus/useBaseUrl'
 
-The Device42 Circuits modules enable management of circuit IDs, vendors and the customers who own the circuits.
+The Device42 circuits modules enable management of circuit IDs, vendors, and the customers who own the circuits.
 
 <ThemedImage
   alt="Telco circuits overview"
@@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ The Device42 Circuits modules enable management of circuit IDs, vendors and the
   }}
 />
 
-The Circuits module tracks both origin and end connections. The origin and end point types can be a patch panel port, switch port, a device, or another circuit.
+The circuits module tracks both origin and end connections. The origin and endpoint types can be patch panel ports, switch ports, devices, or other circuits.
 
-The module also tracks order date, provision date, turn on date and contract start/end dates.
+The module also tracks order date, provision date, turn on date, and contract start and end dates.
 
-File attachments, custom fields and purchase/support info are also available on this screen.
+File attachments, custom fields, and purchase and support info are also available on this screen.