998: Edit cables.mdx

Author: bethh0rn

docs/infrastructure-management/connectivity/cables.mdx

@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ import useBaseUrl from '@docusaurus/useBaseUrl'
 
 The Device42 cables module can track the origin, end connection(s), length, and path for each of your cables.
 
-The origin and end point types can be a patch panel port, a switch port, a device, a circuit, or another cable. A given cable endpoint can also be an origin for multiple other cables.
+The origin and endpoint types can be patch panel ports, switch ports, devices, circuits, or other cables. A given cable endpoint can also be an origin for multiple other cables.
 
-Find the "Add Cable" screen under _HARDWARE --> Cables_
+Find the Add Cable screen under **Hardware > Cables**.
 
 <ThemedImage
   alt="Add A Cable"
@@ -22,13 +22,13 @@ Find the "Add Cable" screen under _HARDWARE --> Cables_
   }}
 />
 
-Cables also have their own unique properties (see "Add Cable" screen in the above image). Aside from length, connector type, and location, cables support [custom fields](../../administration/custom-key-value-pairs-explained.mdx), as well.
+Cables also have their own unique properties (see the Add Cable screen in the above image). In addition to length, connector type, and location, cables support [custom fields](../../administration/custom-key-value-pairs-explained.mdx).
 
-### Drag and Drop Cabling from the Rack View
+### Drag-and-Drop Cabling From the Rack View
 
-From the rack view, you can create, move, edit, and trace cables visually via drag and drop, in addition to the above method.
+From the rack view, you can create, move, edit, and trace cables visually via the drag-and-drop functionality, in addition to the above method.
 
-From the "Rack View" (DATACENTER --> Racks --> YourRack --> View Rack Layout), you can view or easily add a cable connection by clicking "Physical Connections" under "Rack Details" on the left, and enabling "Edit Mode":
+From the rack view (**Data Center > Racks > Your Rack > View Rack Layout**), you can also view or add a cable connection by clicking **Physical Connections** under **Rack Details** on the left and enabling Edit mode:
 
 <ThemedImage
   alt="Visually Add a Cable"
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ From the "Rack View" (DATACENTER --> Racks --> YourRack --> View Rack Layout), y
 
 ### View Cables on Impact Charts
 
-If your network Device has cables connected to it (A Load balancer, for example), you'll be able to view those connections in the device's impact chart. See the following image:
+If your network device has cables connected to it (a load balancer, for example), you can view those connections in the device's impact chart. See the following image:
 
 <ThemedImage
   alt="Trace Cables in impact view"