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Co-authored-by: Allie Sadler <[email protected]>

Author: lorenrh

content/manuals/desktop/release-notes.md

@@ -47,16 +47,16 @@ Take a look at the [Docker Public Roadmap](https://github.com/orgs/docker/projec
 
 #### For all platforms
 
-- Fixed a bug where `docker events` command would not terminate after streaming the events.
-- Docker Init: Improved Dockerfile caching for PHP applications that don't use Composer.
-- Synchronized File Shares now respect `filesharingAllowedDirectories` setting in `admin-settings.json`.
-- Fixed an issue where Docker Desktop configured to use proxy, fails to start due to an internal timeout while fetching authentication tokens.
+- Fixed a bug where the `docker events` command would not terminate after streaming the events.
+- Docker Init: Improved Dockerfile caching for PHP applications that don't use Compose.
+- Synchronized file shares now respects the `filesharingAllowedDirectories` setting in `admin-settings.json`.
+- Fixed an issue where if Docker Desktop is configured to use a proxy, it fails to start due to an internal timeout while fetching authentication tokens.
 - Moved Notifications bell to header.
 - Moved Settings button to the sidebar.
-- Added a recovery banner to retry update if download failed
-- Fixed an issue where there would be a filesystem error if the umask is set to 577 causing rpmbuild failure. Fixes [docker/for-mac](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6511).
+- Added a recovery banner to retry an update if the download failed.
+- Fixed an issue where if the `umask` is set to `577` it would cause `rpmbuild` failure. Fixes [docker/for-mac](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6511).
 - Fixed a bug that caused ports open on the host to 18 for containers started with `--network=host`.
-- Fixes bind mount ownership for non-root containers. Fixes [docker/for-mac#6243](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6243).
+- Fixed bind mount ownership for non-root containers. Fixes [docker/for-mac#6243](https://github.com/docker/for-mac/issues/6243).
 
 #### For Mac