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Co-authored-by: Daniel Roth <[email protected]>

Author: guardrex

aspnetcore/fundamentals/minimal-apis/overview.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ uid: fundamentals/minimal-apis/overview
 
 [!INCLUDE[](~/includes/not-latest-version.md)]
 
-Minimal APIs are a simplified approach for building fast HTTP APIs with ASP.NET Core. You can build fully functioning REST endpoints with minimal code and configuration. Skip traditional scaffolding and avoid unnecessary controllers by fluently declaring API routes and actions. For example, the following code creates an API at the root of a web app that returns a greeting:
+Minimal APIs are a simplified approach for building fast HTTP APIs with ASP.NET Core. You can build fully functioning REST endpoints with minimal code and configuration. For example, the following code creates an API at the root of a web app that returns a greeting:
 
 ```csharp
 var app = WebApplication.Create(args);

aspnetcore/includes/benefits.md

@@ -5,15 +5,16 @@ ASP.NET Core provides the following benefits:
 <!-- AUTHOR NOTE: >=6.0 content showcases Blazor and 
                   Minimal APIs, demotes RP/MVC -->
 
-* A unified story for building web apps, web APIs, Azure IoT (Internet of Things) apps, and mobile backends.
+* A unified story for building web apps, web APIs, IoT (Internet of Things) apps, and mobile backends.
 * Architected for testability.
-* [Blazor](xref:blazor/index) lets you create rich interactive client-side UIs using [.NET](/dotnet/standard/tour) and [C#](/dotnet/csharp/) with wide browser support based on HTML/JavaScript, including mobile browsers. You can also build hybrid desktop and mobile apps with .NET and Blazor.
-* [Minimal APIs](xref:fundamentals/minimal-apis) are a simplified approach for building fast web APIs with minimal code and configuration by fluently declaring API routes and actions.
-* Supports [Razor Pages](xref:razor-pages/index) and [Model-View-Controller (MVC)](xref:mvc/overview) app development.
+* Create rich interactive web UI with [Blazor](xref:blazor/index) using [C#](/dotnet/csharp/)&mdash;no JavaScript required. Reuse your Blazor components to build native mobile and desktop apps with [Blazor Hybrid](xref:blazor/hybrid/index).
+* [Minimal APIs](xref:fundamentals/minimal-apis) are a simplified approach for building fast web APIs with minimal code and configuration by fluently declaring API routes and endpoints.
 * Ability to develop and run on Windows, macOS, and Linux.
-* Open-source and [community-focused](https://live.asp.net/).
+* Open-source and [community-focused](https://dotnet.microsoft.com/platform/community).
 * Integrate seamlessly with popular client-side frameworks and libraries, including [Angular](/visualstudio/javascript/tutorial-asp-net-core-with-angular), [React](/visualstudio/javascript/tutorial-asp-net-core-with-react), [Vue](/visualstudio/javascript/tutorial-asp-net-core-with-vue), and [Bootstrap](https://getbootstrap.com/). 
-* Support for hosting Remote Procedure Call (RPC) services using [gRPC](xref:grpc/index).
+* Add real-time web functionality to apps using [SignalR](xref:signalr/index).
+* Support for hosting Remote Procedure Call (RPC) services using [gRPC](xref:grpc/introduction).
+* Built-in security features for [authentication](xref:security/authentication/index) and [authorization](xref:security/authorization/introduction).
 * A cloud-ready, environment-based [configuration system](xref:fundamentals/configuration/index).
 * Built-in [dependency injection](xref:fundamentals/dependency-injection).
 * A lightweight, [high-performance](https://github.com/aspnet/benchmarks), and modular HTTP request pipeline.

aspnetcore/introduction-to-aspnet-core.md

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Use ASP.NET Core to build web apps with:
 
 :::moniker range=">= aspnetcore-6.0"
 
-* [Blazor](xref:blazor/index), a component-based web UI framework based on C# that supports both server-side rendering via the .NET runtime and client-side rendering via WebAssembly.
+* [Blazor](xref:blazor/index), a component-based web UI framework based on C# that supports both server-side rendering and client-side rendering via WebAssembly.
 * [Minimal APIs](xref:fundamentals/minimal-apis), a simplified approach for building fast web APIs with minimal code and configuration by fluently declaring API routes and actions.
 
 :::moniker-end
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ ASP.NET Core 2.x is supported on .NET Framework versions that implement .NET Sta
 
 To help close the API gap from .NET Framework to .NET Core 2.x, the [Windows Compatibility Pack](/dotnet/core/porting/windows-compat-pack) made thousands of Windows-only APIs available. These APIs weren't available in .NET Core 1.x.
 
-## Recommended learning path (TABLES LAYOUT OPTION)
+## Tutorials to get started
 
 <!-- AUTHOR NOTE: This is the original layout using tables. -->
 
@@ -81,8 +81,6 @@ Web app | New server and client web development with Blazor &ndash; ***Recommend
 Web API | Server-based data processing with Minimal APIs &ndash; ***Recommended*** | <xref:tutorials/min-web-api> and [Build a web API with minimal API, ASP.NET Core, and .NET (.NET SDK)](/training/modules/build-web-api-minimal-api/)
 Remote Procedure Call (RPC) app | Contract-first services using Protocol Buffers | <xref:tutorials/grpc/grpc-start>
 Real-time app | Server/client bidirectional communication | <xref:tutorials/signalr>
-Web app | New server-side web development with Razor Pages | <xref:tutorials/razor-pages/razor-pages-start>
-Web app | New server-side web development with MVC | <xref:tutorials/first-mvc-app/start-mvc>
 
 :::moniker-end
 
@@ -117,8 +115,6 @@ The tutorials in the following table teach data access concepts.
 Scenario | Tutorial
 -------- | --------
 New development with Blazor | <xref:blazor/tutorials/movie-database-app/index>
-New development with Razor Pages | <xref:data/ef-rp/intro>
-New development with MVC | <xref:data/ef-mvc/intro>
 
 :::moniker-end
 
@@ -237,13 +233,6 @@ See the [ASP.NET Core fundamentals articles](xref:fundamentals/index), which app
 
 Browse the table of contents for other topics of interest.
 
-## Migrate from .NET Framework
-
-For a reference guide on migrating ASP.NET 4.x apps to ASP.NET Core, see <xref:migration/fx-to-core/index>.
-
-## Breaking changes and security advisories
-
-[!INCLUDE[](~/includes/announcements.md)]
 
 ## Additional resources
 

aspnetcore/release-notes/aspnetcore-1.1.md

@@ -29,4 +29,4 @@ ASP.NET Core 1.1 has more features than ASP.NET Core 1.0. In general, we recomme
 ## Additional Information
 
 * [ASP.NET Core 1.1.0 Release Notes](https://github.com/dotnet/aspnetcore/releases/tag/1.1.0)
-* To connect with the ASP.NET Core development team's progress and plans, tune in to [.NET Live TV](https://dotnet.microsoft.com/live).
+* To connect with the ASP.NET Core development team's progress and plans, tune in to [.NET Live TV](https://live.dot.net).

aspnetcore/release-notes/aspnetcore-2.0.md

@@ -153,4 +153,4 @@ For guidance on how to migrate ASP.NET Core 1.x applications to ASP.NET Core 2.0
 
 For the complete list of changes, see the [ASP.NET Core 2.0 Release Notes](https://github.com/dotnet/aspnetcore/releases/tag/2.0.0).
 
-To connect with the ASP.NET Core development team's progress and plans, tune in to [.NET Live TV](https://dotnet.microsoft.com/live).
+To connect with the ASP.NET Core development team's progress and plans, tune in to [.NET Live TV](https://live.dot.net).