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Co-authored-by: Luke Latham <[email protected]>

Author: wadepickett

aspnetcore/log-mon/metrics/metrics.md

@@ -267,17 +267,17 @@ The proceeding test:
 
 ## ASP.NET Core Identity metrics
 
-ASP.NET Core Identity observability has been improved in .NET 10 with metrics. These metrics help you monitor user management activities and authentication processes.
+ASP.NET Core Identity observability help you monitor user management activities and authentication processes.
 
-The metrics are in the `Microsoft.AspNetCore.Identity` meter and include:
+The metrics are in the `Microsoft.AspNetCore.Identity` meter and are described in the following sections.
 
 ### User management metrics
 
-* `aspnetcore.identity.user.create.duration` - Measures the duration of user creation operations
+* `aspnetcore.identity.user.create.duration` measures the duration of user creation operations.
 * `aspnetcore.identity.user.update.duration` - Measures the duration of user update operations
 * `aspnetcore.identity.user.delete.duration` - Measures the duration of user deletion operations
 * `aspnetcore.identity.user.check_password_attempts` - Counts password verification attempts
-* `aspnetcore.identity.user.generated_tokens` - Counts tokens generated for users (like password reset tokens)
+* `aspnetcore.identity.user.generated_tokens` counts tokens generated for users , such as password reset tokens.
 * `aspnetcore.identity.user.verify_token_attempts` - Counts token verification attempts
 
 ### Authentication metrics
@@ -291,14 +291,14 @@ The metrics are in the `Microsoft.AspNetCore.Identity` meter and include:
 
 These metrics can be used to:
 
-* Monitor user registration and management
-* Track authentication patterns and potential security issues
-* Measure performance of Identity operations
-* Observe two-factor authentication usage
+* Monitor user registration and management.
+* Track authentication patterns and potential security issues.
+* Measure performance of Identity operations.
+* Observe two-factor authentication usage.
 
 ### Viewing Identity metrics
 
-You can view these metrics using `dotnet-counters` to monitor them in real-time, or export them to Prometheus and visualize them in Grafana using the techniques described earlier in this article.
+You can view these metrics using `dotnet-counters` to monitor them in real-time or export them to Prometheus and visualize them in Grafana using the techniques described earlier in this article.
 
 For example, to monitor all Identity metrics with `dotnet-counters`:
 

aspnetcore/security/authentication/identity.md

@@ -204,15 +204,17 @@ The template-generated app doesn't use [authorization](xref:security/authorizati
 For more information on `IdentityOptions`, see <xref:Microsoft.AspNetCore.Identity.IdentityOptions> and [Application Startup](xref:fundamentals/startup).
 
 :::moniker-end
+
 :::moniker range=">= aspnetcore-10.0"
 
 ## ASP.NET Core Identity metrics
 
-ASP.NET Core Identity metrics provide monitoring capabilities for user management and authentication processes. These metrics help you detect unusual sign-in patterns that might indicate security threats, track the performance of identity operations, and understand how users interact with authentication features such as two-factor authentication. This observability is particularly valuable for applications with strict security requirements or those experiencing high authentication traffic. The ASP.NET Core Identity metrics were introduced in .NET 10.
+ASP.NET Core Identity metrics provide monitoring capabilities for user management and authentication processes. These metrics help you detect unusual sign-in patterns that might indicate security threats, track the performance of identity operations, and understand how users interact with authentication features, such as two-factor authentication. This observability is particularly valuable for apps with strict security requirements or those experiencing high authentication traffic.
 
 For complete details on available metrics and how to use them, see <xref:log-mon/metrics/metrics#aspnet-core-identity-metrics>.
 
 :::moniker-end
+
 :::moniker range=">= aspnetcore-8.0"
 
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