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aspnetcore/fundamentals/dotnet-scaffold-telemetry.md

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 # dotnet-scaffold telemetry
 
-The dotnet-scaffold command includes a telemetry feature that collects usage data. This feature helps the dotnet-scaffold team understand how the tool is used so it can be improved.
+The `dotnet-scaffold` command includes a telemetry feature that collects usage data. This feature helps the `dotnet-scaffold` team understand how the tool is used so it can be improved.
 
 ## How to opt out
 
-The dotnet-scaffold telemetry feature is enabled by default. To opt out of the telemetry feature, set the `DOTNET_SCAFFOLD_TELEMETRY_OPTOUT` environment variable to `1` or `true`.
+The `dotnet-scaffold` telemetry feature is enabled by default. To opt out of the telemetry feature, set the `DOTNET_SCAFFOLD_TELEMETRY_OPTOUT` environment variable to `1` or `true`.
 
 ## Disclosure
 
-The dotnet-scaffold displays text similar to the following when you first run the tool. Text may vary slightly depending on the version of the tool you're running. This "first run" experience is how Microsoft notifies you about data collection.
+When you run the `dotnet-scaffold` tool the first time, it displays output similar to the following example. The text may vary slightly depending on the version of the tool you're running. This "first run" experience is how Microsoft notifies you about data collection.
 
 ```console
 dotnet-scaffold collects usage data in order to help us improve your experience. The data is collected by Microsoft and shared with the community. You can opt-out of telemetry by setting the DOTNET_SCAFFOLD_TELEMETRY_OPTOUT environment variable to '1' or 'true' using your favorite shell.