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Author: alexwolfmsft

docs/azure/sdk/authentication/local-development-dev-accounts.md

@@ -93,18 +93,19 @@ Connect-AzAccount -UseDeviceAuthentication
 
 ### [Visual Studio Code](#tab/sign-in-visual-studio-code)
 
-Developers using Visual Studio Code can authenticate using their developer account directly through the code editor. Apps using <xref:Azure.Identity.DefaultAzureCredential> or <xref:Azure.Identity.VisualStudioCodeCredential> can discover and use this account to authenticate app requests when running locally.
 
-1. Inside Visual Studio Code, navigate to the **Extensions** panel and install the [Azure Resources](https://marketplace.visualstudio.com/items?itemName=ms-azuretools.vscode-azureresourcegroups) extension. This extension lets you to view and manage Azure resources directly from Visual Studio Code. It also uses the built-in Visual Studio Code Microsoft authentication provider to authenticate with Azure.
+Developers using Visual Studio Code can authenticate with their developer account directly through the editor. Apps that use <xref:Azure.Identity.DefaultAzureCredential> or <xref:Azure.Identity.VisualStudioCodeCredential> can discover and use this account to authenticate app requests when running locally.
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+1. In Visual Studio Code, go to the **Extensions** panel and install the [Azure Resources](https://marketplace.visualstudio.com/items?itemName=ms-azuretools.vscode-azureresourcegroups) extension. This extension lets you view and manage Azure resources directly from Visual Studio Code. It also uses the built-in Visual Studio Code Microsoft authentication provider to authenticate with Azure.
 
     :::image type="content" source="../media/azure-resources-extension.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Azure Resources extension.":::
 
-1. From the Command Palette in Visual Studio Code, search for and select **Azure: Sign in**.
+1. Open the Command Palette in Visual Studio Code, then search for and select **Azure: Sign in**.
 
-    :::image type="content" source="../media/visual-studio-code-sign-in.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing how to sign-in to Azure in Visual Studio Code.":::
+    :::image type="content" source="../media/visual-studio-code-sign-in.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing how to sign in to Azure in Visual Studio Code.":::
 
     > [!TIP]
-    > Open the Command Palette using `Ctrl+Shift+P` on Windows/Linux and `Cmd+Shift+P` on MacOS.
+    > Open the Command Palette using `Ctrl+Shift+P` on Windows/Linux or `Cmd+Shift+P` on macOS.
 
 1. Add the [Azure.Identity.Broker](https://www.nuget.org/packages/Azure.Identity.Broker) NuGet package to your app: