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Author: gewarren

docs/framework/release-notes/2024/11-12-november-security-and-quality-rollup.md

@@ -26,13 +26,13 @@ This security update addresses an information disclosure vulnerability with the
 
 #### ASP.NET
 
-Addresses an issue where  "The type initializer for ‘System.Web.UI.Util’ threw an exception." error with design-time compilation in Visual Studio for .NET Framework ASP.NET projects (*Applies to: .NET Framework 4.8, 4.8.1.*)
+Addresses an issue where  "The type initializer for 'System.Web.UI.Util' threw an exception." error with design-time compilation in Visual Studio for .NET Framework ASP.NET projects. (*Applies to: .NET Framework 4.8, 4.8.1.*)
 
 #### CLR
 
-Address an issue where in rare cases where an infinite loop could occur when a thread enters CLR for the first (*Applies to: .NET Framework 4.6.2, 4.7, 4.7.1, 4.7.2, 4.8, 4.8.1.*)
+Addresses an issue where, in rare cases, an infinite loop could occur when a thread enters CLR for the first time. (*Applies to: .NET Framework 4.6.2, 4.7, 4.7.1, 4.7.2, 4.8, 4.8.1.*)
 
-Address an issue in cases where incorrect interface call devirtualization could occur when JIT optimizations are enabled (*Applies to: .NET Framework 4.6.2, 4.7, 4.7.1, 4.7.2, 4.8, 4.8.1.*)
+Addresses an issue where incorrect interface call devirtualization could occur when JIT optimizations are enabled. (*Applies to: .NET Framework 4.6.2, 4.7, 4.7.1, 4.7.2, 4.8, 4.8.1.*)
 
 Addresses an issue with out of memory exceptions during garbage collection while running applications running under job limits (*Applies to: .NET Framework 4.8, 4.8.1.*)