Address feedback from peer review

[meaghanlewis]

Type of issue

Missing information

Description

Feedback from peer review:

• Split up giant table. Ideas include:
  • Add tabs for each version
  • One row for each version with a bulleted list for the data. Start with most recent versions first.
  • Switch the column order for SDK versions and data
  • Code fence options reported in data points table
• Boolean should always be capitalized (I think).
• Environment variables should be code fenced so they're not overlocalized - which is happening already in this doc.
• Suggest moving the breaking change NOTE below the output so the output isn't separated from its intro text
• Remove the part about sending an email to dotnet@microsoft.com
• Link to the Microsoft privacy statement? Microsoft Privacy Statement – Microsoft privacy
• Can the Avoid inadvertent disclosure of information section be mentioned earlier with the opt-out section?

After addressing feedback:

• Update https://dev.azure.com/msft-skilling/Content/_workitems/edit/503401 with PR link
• Close issue

Page URL

https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/dotnet/core/tools/telemetry

Content source URL

https://github.com/dotnet/docs/blob/main/docs/core/tools/telemetry.md

Document Version Independent Id

50433ae5-4687-fe5f-75ab-a47e1a706777

Platform Id

315d25b4-0ae6-3fff-2eac-19afec16d9c7

Article author

@meaghanlewis

Metadata

• ID: c136055b-bb04-17b6-19b2-42d4610c1a70
• PlatformId: 315d25b4-0ae6-3fff-2eac-19afec16d9c7
• Service: dotnet-fundamentals

Related Issues

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Associated WorkItem - 508715