improve bullet points to be more professional

dphuang2 · dphuang2 · commit 434325dbb229 · 2024-11-14T20:06:14.000-08:00
diff --git a/src/components/Home.tsx b/src/components/Home.tsx
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ const achievements: Achievement[] = [
     year: 2019,
     type: "professional",
     description:
-      "Received a cease and desist letter for a Shopify App Store side project",
+      "Built and launched a Shopify app in a week that had revenue on day 1 of launch",
   },
   {
     year: 2019,
@@ -152,7 +152,8 @@ const achievements: Achievement[] = [
   {
     year: 2017,
     type: "professional",
-    description: "Won a game of HQ Trivia using AI",
+    description:
+      "Won a game of HQ Trivia using classical NLP techniques (pre-LLM era)",
     links: [
       {
         text: "[Blog Post]",

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`@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ const achievements: Achievement[] = [`
`94`	`94`	`year: 2019,`
`95`	`95`	`type: "professional",`
`96`	`96`	`description:`
`97`		`- "Received a cease and desist letter for a Shopify App Store side project",`
	`97`	`+ "Built and launched a Shopify app in a week that had revenue on day 1 of launch",`
`98`	`98`	`},`
`99`	`99`	`{`
`100`	`100`	`year: 2019,`
`@@ -152,7 +152,8 @@ const achievements: Achievement[] = [`
`152`	`152`	`{`
`153`	`153`	`year: 2017,`
`154`	`154`	`type: "professional",`
`155`		`- description: "Won a game of HQ Trivia using AI",`
	`155`	`+ description:`
	`156`	`+ "Won a game of HQ Trivia using classical NLP techniques (pre-LLM era)",`
`156`	`157`	`links: [`
`157`	`158`	`{`
`158`	`159`	`text: "[Blog Post]",`