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Co-authored-by: Benjamin Ironside Goldstein <[email protected]>
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release-notes/elastic-security/index.md

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 ## 9.1.7 [elastic-security-9.1.7-release-notes]
 
 ### Features and enhancements [elastic-security-9.1.7-features-enhancements]
-* Improves the reliability of Cloud Security Posture (CSP) data by automatically upgrading outdated Misconfiguration and Vulnerabilities data views to the correct versions  [#238547]({{kib-pull}}238547).
+* Improves the reliability of Cloud Security Posture (CSP) data by automatically upgrading outdated Misconfiguration and Vulnerabilities data views to the correct versions [#238547]({{kib-pull}}238547).
 * Adds more {{elastic-defend}} options to the {{ls}} output, allowing for finer control.
 * Improves the accuracy of thread CPU usage reported in {{elastic-defend}} metrics documents.
 
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 * Fixes an {{elastic-defend}} issue on Linux by preventing unnecessary locking within malware protection to avoid invalid watchdog firings.
 * Fixes issues that could sometimes cause crashes of the {{elastic-defend}} user-mode process on very busy Windows systems.
 * Fixes multiple {{elastic-defend}} issues in malware protection for Linux where a deadlock could sometimes occur when containers and autofs were both active.
-* Fixes an {{elastic-defend}} issue on Windows which could allow a low-privilege attacker to delete arbitrary files on the system and potentially escalate privileges to SYSTEM. Windows 11 24H2 includes changes which make this issue harder to exploit.
+* Fixes CVE-2025-37735 ([ESA-2025-23](https://discuss.elastic.co/t/elastic-defend-8-19-6-9-1-6-and-9-2-0-security-update-esa-2025-23/383272)) in {{elastic-defend}} on Windows which could allow a low-privilege attacker to delete arbitrary files on the system and potentially escalate privileges to SYSTEM. Windows 11 24H2 includes changes which make this issue harder to exploit.
 * Fixes an {{elastic-defend}} bug in Linux event collection where some long-running processes were not enriched.
-* Fixes an issue in {{elastic-defend}} that could cause the `get-file` and `execute` response actions to start failing after many are issued with a single running instance of {{elastic-defend}}.
+* Fixes an {{elastic-defend}} issue that could cause the `get-file` and `execute` response actions to fail after many were issued with a single running instance of {{elastic-defend}}.
 
 
 ## 9.1.6 [elastic-security-9.1.6-release-notes]