Suggestions from @benironside

Co-authored-by: Benjamin Ironside Goldstein <[email protected]>

Author: florent-leborgne

explore-analyze/_snippets/multi-value-esql-controls.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 You can create controls that let users select multiple values. To do that:
 
-1. Add the [`MV_CONTAINS`](elasticsearch://reference/query-languages/esql/functions-operators/mv-functions.md#esql-mv_contains) function to your query, and [create a variable](#add-variable-control) as one of the function parameters. For example:
+1. Add the [`MV_CONTAINS`](elasticsearch://reference/query-languages/esql/functions-operators/mv-functions.md#esql-mv_contains) function to your query, and [create a variable](#add-variable-control) as one of its parameters. For example:
 
     ```esql
     FROM logs-* | WHERE MV_CONTAINS(?values, field)
@@ -14,4 +14,4 @@ You can create controls that let users select multiple values. To do that:
 
 3. Save the control.
 
-The newly configured control becomes available and allows to select multiple values.
+The newly configured control becomes available and allows users to select multiple values.

explore-analyze/_snippets/variable-control-procedure.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-1. While editing your {{esql}} query, the autocomplete menu suggests adding a control when relevant or when typing `?` in the query. Select **Create control**.
+1. While you edit your {{esql}} query, the autocomplete menu suggests adding a control when relevant or when you type `?` in the query. Select **Create control**.
 
    ![ESQL query prompting to add a control](/explore-analyze/images/esql-visualization-control-suggestion.png " =40%")