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Co-authored-by: Kaarina Tungseth <[email protected]>

Author: georgewallace

serverless/pages/get-started-general.asciidoc

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 
 There are two options to create serverless projects:
 
-* If you are a new user, you can https://cloud.elastic.co/serverless-registration[sign up for a free 14-day trial], and you will be able to launch a serverless project. For more information about the trial see, <<general-sign-up-trial-what-is-included-in-my-trial,What is included in my trial?>>.
+* If you are a new user, https://cloud.elastic.co/serverless-registration[sign up for a free 14-day trial] to create a serverless project. For more information about the Elastic Cloud trials check, <<general-sign-up-trial-what-is-included-in-my-trial,What is included in my trial?>>.
 
 * If you are an existing customer, https://cloud.elastic.co/login[log in to Elastic Cloud]. On the home page, you will see a new option to create serverless projects.
 

serverless/pages/manage-billing.asciidoc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <titleabbrev>Billing</titleabbrev>
 ++++
 
-You can manage the billing details of your organization directly from the Elastic Cloud console. Bills are invoiced according to the billing contact and details that you set for your organization.
+Manage the billing details of your organization directly from the Elastic Cloud console. Bills are invoiced according to the billing contact and details that you set for your organization.
 
 . Navigate to https://cloud.elastic.co/[cloud.elastic.co] and log in to your Elastic Cloud account.
 . Go to the user icon on the header bar and select **Billing**.

serverless/pages/manage-org.asciidoc

@@ -28,15 +28,15 @@ Alternatively, {cloud}/ec-saml-sso.html[configure {ecloud} SAML SSO] to enable y
 . On the **Members** page, click **Invite members**.
 . Enter the email addresses of the users you want to invite in the textbox.
 +
-You can add multiple members by entering their email addresses separated by a space or pressing Enter.
+To add multiple members, enter the member email addresses, separated by a space.
 +
-You can grant access to all projects of the same type with a unique role, or select individual roles for specific projects.
+Grant access to all projects of the same type with a unique role, or select individual roles for specific projects.
 For more details about roles, refer to <<general-assign-user-roles>>.
 . Click **Send invites**.
 +
 Invitations to join an organization are sent by email. Invited users have 72 hours to accept the invitation before it expires. If the invite has expired, an admin can resend the invitation.
 
-On the **Members** tab of the **Organization** page, you can view the list of current members, their status and role.
+On the **Members** tab of the **Organization** page, view the list of current members, including status and role.
 
 In the **Actions** column, click the three dots to edit a member's role or revoke the invite.
 
@@ -69,19 +69,19 @@ There are two types of roles you can assign to users:
 === Instance access roles
 
 Each serverless project type has a set of predefined roles that you can assign to your organization members.
-You can assign the predefined roles:
+To assign the predefined roles:
 
 * globally, for all projects of the same type ({es-serverless}, {observability}, or {elastic-sec}). In this case, the role will also apply to new projects created later.
 * individually, for specific projects only. To do that, you have to set the **Role for all** field of that specific project type to **None**.
 
-For example, you can assign a user the developer role for a specific {es-serverless} project:
+For example, assign a user the developer role for a specific {es-serverless} project:
 
 [role="screenshot"]
 image::images/individual-role.png[Individual role]
 
 ifdef::serverlessCustomRoles[]
 
-You can also optionally <<custom-roles,create custom roles in a project>>.
+You can optionally <<custom-roles,create custom roles in a project>>.
 To assign a custom role to users, go to "Instance access roles" and select it from the list under the specific project it was created in.
 
 endif::[]
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ endif::[]
 
 On the **Organization** page, click **Leave organization**.
 
-If you're the only user in the organization, you can only leave if you have deleted all your projects and don't have any pending bills.
+If you're the only user in the organization, you are able to leave only when you have deleted all projects and don't have any pending bills.
 
 [discrete]
 [[general-join-organization-from-existing-cloud-account]]

serverless/pages/sign-up.asciidoc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [[general-sign-up-trial]]
-= How do I sign up?
+= Sign up for Elastic Cloud
 
 // :description: Information about signing up for a serverless Elastic Cloud trial
 // :keywords: serverless, general, signup
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ If you’re interested in learning more ways to subscribe to Elastic Cloud, don
 
 [discrete]
 [[general-sign-up-trial-how-do-i-sign-up-through-a-marketplace]]
-== How do I sign up through a marketplace?
+== Sign up through a marketplace
 
 If you’re interested in consolidated billing, subscribe from the AWS Marketplace, which allows you to skip the trial period and connect your AWS Marketplace email to your unique Elastic account. For a list of regions supported, see <<regions,Regions>>.
 
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ Check {cloud}/ec-account-user-settings.html[Edit user account settings] for more
 
 [discrete]
 [[general-sign-up-trial-how-do-i-get-help]]
-== How do I get help?
+== Get help and support
 
 We’re here to help. If you have any questions, reach out to https://cloud.elastic.co/support[Support].
 

serverless/pages/welcome-to-serverless.asciidoc

@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ Migration paths between hosted deployments and serverless projects are currently
 
 **How can I move data to or from serverless projects?**
 
-We are working on data migration tools! In the interim, you can <<elasticsearch-ingest-data-through-logstash,use Logstash>> with Elasticsearch input and output plugins to move data to and from serverless projects.
+We are working on data migration tools! In the interim, <<elasticsearch-ingest-data-through-logstash,use Logstash>> with Elasticsearch input and output plugins to move data to and from serverless projects.
 
 **How does serverless ensure compatibility between software versions?**